Black Poetry : Don't touch me

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  1. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Waiting for the phone to ring
    quitting time was hours in the past
    there's no traffic at night
    but there's suspicion in my mind
    finally beauty's revealed
    get comfortable if you will
    well, at least you're not dead
    that's what was running through my head
    but it's too late for excuses
    death would be an acceptable one
    since the phone didn't ring
    don't you need to tell me something?
    You had on lipstick when you left
    but not that red dress
    that clings to the flesh
    no need for words
    can't fool my heart
    my minds more dependable
    than your empty words
    so please don't try to explain
    but please......do get your things
    affection should have been hours ago
    so PLEASE DON"T TOUCH ME NOW
     
  2. Luver2B

    Luver2B Active Member MEMBER

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    I like, I like a lot.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    moments of time ......tyte drop
    and i promise not to touch ya !!!!
    PHONE RANG !))))
     
  4. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :( I won't touch ya.......:wink:
    flow on brotha
     
  5. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You guys are crazy. Thanks for the replies though family. Peace :peace:
     
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    I hear ya, the last thing you'd want is to be touched at a time like that, tight drop.
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    flow on poet
     
  8. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa...this hit like
    a sledgehammer
    with emotion...
    you captured me
    in the embrace of this
    peace...to the very end
    excellent writing...
     
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    i hear you my brotha...
    everything done in the dark
    eventually comes to light....
    this piece was tyte...
    one love
    khasm
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was tight
    flow on
    i hear ya on dis
    Peace
    Angel
     
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