Black Poetry : Dont tell me what to feel...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by triniti424, Sep 16, 2003.

  1. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    gurl!
    i hear u so clear and the message ringing loud
    this was str8 tyte and forward
    lovin dis here
     
  3. Khasm13

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    whoa....
    you told him a thing or two

    "For right now…
    I need relief
    don’t tell me to be brief
    cuz ya cant handle ya own grief "

    for being in the mist of da storm
    your clarity is remarkable...
    dat cats loss
    is our poetic gain
    so let da tears rain
    peace
    khasm
     
  4. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow.....I don't even know where to begin
    but I feel you.......it's so much easier for
    others to tell you to get over it.......when
    they can't feel what you feel and have never
    experienced such levels of pain.......it's best to deal with
    it right then......or else you'll deal with it later

    and that's real..........wow, I was draped in the emotion of your flow......had a sisters heart feeling the melancholy......

    wow...
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl i like this flow
    tight....
     
  6. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl...you are right on point...i hate when people tell you don't cry when yes you do need to...i heard that so much coming up as a little girl and now...it's all i do. maybe that's why i do it so much. you go ahead and do whatever you need to do to find peace. much love.
     
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    Oh MY FLIPPING GOODNESS!!! THIS IS HOT!! GIRL, AND YOU SAY YOU DONT GOT IT... PLEASE.... UR ON FIRE...
     
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    i love this.
     
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    Khasm

    I second what you said.

    " for being in the mist of da storm
    your clarity is remarkable... "

    This is tight Triniti.
     
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    Gorgeous flow, girl. (as usual) To me, this said feel your feelings. I used to spend a lot of time trying to avoid mine. Now I feel them and let them go artfully. Appreciate this piece.
     
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