Black Poetry : Don't Step To Me...Step to Your Man, Pt 2

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by jazzymoonchild, Jun 8, 2004.

  1. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I called his office and his cell
    His boy, with the Lex,
    I know well
    has 2 kids,
    girl named Michelle

    To trips and concerts,
    we have ventured,
    many fine restaurants,
    we have entered

    I could be cruel, I won't
    But I'll tell you this...
    Your man, while with me
    NEVER mentioned you Miss

    I wasn't in the club
    with my thigh in his face,
    nor acting in a manner
    to shame or disgrace

    I DO know my momma
    my father as well,
    I'm telling you
    about you
    He did not tell

    You need to know
    and fully understand,
    I did not chase or pursue
    your man

    Time he would find
    without even trying
    So smooth he was
    couldn't tell he was lying

    Me with anotha..
    he couldn't stand that
    So he wined and he dined
    and spent with out flack

    I laid with him
    yes,..and protected my health
    'cause I cannot love him
    more than I love self.

    You're crying on the phone
    but where is he?
    Driving in his car,
    seeking more coochie

    I told him his sentence
    and banged down my gavel
    he was instantly fired
    when his stories unraveled

    I could be an itch
    and lay you out,
    but I've been here before
    no doubt

    I know that you love him
    and think he loves you
    stop all that drama
    he played you too!

    The difference between
    you and I
    is I took care of me
    so no need to cry

    You pissed me off
    and I'm full of rage
    but I will not act
    like a cat in a cage

    This is not OZ
    or some fairytale land

    So DON'T step to me.....

    STEP TO YOUR MAN.

    jazzymoonchild, copyright @ June 2004
     
  2. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    where's tha appluse button when I need it??? This was tight!!!!!:heart:
     
  3. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU SWIFT!!!! :wave:
     
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    actually is crazy/funny when a man gets cut in his own lies thinkin he was smooth in his game :driveby:
    likes the way you laid this out....when indeed she need to be addressing him.........feelin ya flow.....Angel
     
  5. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks, Angel!

    Women really need to stop looking at the other woman unless you have concrete proof that that woman knew about you before hand and intentionally disrespected you anyway.
     
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    What can I say? except I'm glad I wasn't the other woman. And you handled it quite well...you laided this down with perfection...for real. But he's just a accident...waiting to happen.
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, indeed!! Thanks, queen :party:
     
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    I really liked the way you flowed about this situation, handled like a proud woman. Well put.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now deep awesome drop ....wow well done
     
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    I hear that one jazzy :lol: Nice flow
    :idea: Don't step to me step to ya Wo-man...... :lol:
     
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