Black Poetry : Don't shoot the piano player

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To seek pleasure Playa.
    You become at times like a shallow lake
    directed at immediate satisfaction.
    Owing no debt or obligation.
    To the water you drink.
    Folding everything you touch
    into a neat ball you consider
    understood.

    You leave her dry in your wake.
    Informal clothing, final contest of will.

    You win.

    Your victims cry out. Scoff you.
    But your actions splitting the emotions,
    mind and body take over the lady.

    She can see you coming, can't escape.
    Not wanting the misery, cause you like others
    bring the waste land.

    Unknown want of you,
    looking in cells, for you.

    Bad Boy syndrome.

    If I could reach the music you bring.
    Play that note on my 88.
    Maybe I would have that beautiful lady
    begging me to return.

    Century old game.

    Yet I haven't learned to play.
    I want pleasure.. I want to be in your shoes..

    No I don't...

    If she gives me a chance to play.
    I'm bringing it different. Changing
    the score. I'll bring new rules. Don't hate me.
    I'm no Playa hater.
    Since I can't play the game.
    I'll just play my way, until things change.
    Play on Playa...I'm just the piano player.
    :cool:
     
  2. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hodee isn't a young man. Not on a cane either....I have a wide sense of humor.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte flowin'
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte...i like it...
     
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    And the piano plays on!!!!!!! nice piece HODEE! I enjoy Essence you present!
     
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    Very nice...............such perspective written regarding the styles of men...Nothin wrong with the Piano Player! Nice flow.
     
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