Black Poetry : Don't Shhhhh.... Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, Jul 23, 2001.

  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 14, 2001
    Messages:
    2,616
    Likes Received:
    4
    Occupation:
    Lover of Words
    Location:
    The PeAcH State
    Ratings:
    +4

    **inspired by Blakverb's "Shhhhh...." it moved me.

    baby…… please….
    don’t shhhhh.… me
    I need to speak…
    …to verbalize precisely
    what you’re doing to me…
    how you (& you alone)
    get into me… move me…
    & make me weak—
    let me say… that when I
    gaze into your dark-ly
    magnificent eyes…
    I encounter that… tingling
    sensation… on the inside
    of my ryght thigh…
    & I’m left completely out
    of breath… but still I can’t
    imagine trying to keep it
    to myself… (& I won’t)…
    so don’t shhhhh…. me
    let me articulate freely…
    while Miles blows a
    passionately hypnotic piece
    to soulfully accompany me
    I… moan a whispered melody
    erotically created for your
    ears on-ly… & your
    hands&mouth on me… seem
    to own me… from my hair
    follicules to the soles of my
    feet… so don’t shhhhh… me
    “I’m realeasing my thoughts
    to you… let them play…”


    © SunShyneOrygynals 2001, all rights reserved
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    Canada
    Joined:
    Jan 28, 2001
    Messages:
    3,759
    Likes Received:
    673
    Gender:
    Male
    Location:
    the near north
    Ratings:
    +836
    LET THAT WOMAN SPEAK...

    she have volumes to say.

    FLOW.
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jun 11, 2001
    Messages:
    7,648
    Likes Received:
    40
    Occupation:
    thrivin' spiritually/physically/emotionally/financ
    Location:
    where failure is not an option
    Ratings:
    +42
    GA_

    i got seizures behind yo' mess
    now i need i refill on my medication

    whew

    boy if i wasn't a gentleman


    >DSSNY<
     
  4. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 19, 2001
    Messages:
    2,627
    Likes Received:
    31
    Gender:
    Male
    Ratings:
    +32
    DAMNNNNNNNNNN.......................!

    GA,

    There it is a


    MASTERPIECE

    and hey,
    I won't Shhhhhhhhhhh.... you

    verb
     
  5. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    2,220
    Likes Received:
    3
    Occupation:
    United States Air Force
    Location:
    South Jersey
    Ratings:
    +3
    Whew!!!!

    And you talk about you need oxygen!!!!

    I'm a dark brown brotha turnin' blue when I read you BlakGurl!!!

    Your pen is perfected!!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  6. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    1,154
    Likes Received:
    0
    Occupation:
    African Dance Instructor/Cultural Educator
    Location:
    Buffalo
    Ratings:
    +0
    Shhhhhhhh!!!!

    I want GA to hear me when I tell her that I'm diggin the flow of this piece!! :D

    You are too much gurl!!! :cool: Still holding out on info sis:confused:
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 14, 2001
    Messages:
    2,616
    Likes Received:
    4
    Occupation:
    Lover of Words
    Location:
    The PeAcH State
    Ratings:
    +4

    Shery. :D... thanks for the suggestion. i think
    imma do just dat!! :)

    Afri. :lol:... there really is nothing to tell! promise!
    thank you for the read!!!

    GQ. erry thing you said was greatly appreciated...
    even more so because it came from you! :)

    Verb. see how you inspire me??? :) i told you so!
    i'm glad you liked it!! read it as often as you want... lol

    Soja. you are wild!! (LOL) seizures, huh? wellll...
    you just need some SunShyne in your life! :wink: thanks
    for the read sweetie!!

    Baller. thank you for the read!! 'preciate cha!
     
  8. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 19, 2001
    Messages:
    2,053
    Likes Received:
    13
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    Teacher of English, Literature &amp; Poetry
    Location:
    Baltimore, Md.
    Ratings:
    +15
    to hell with viagra somebody get her a pack of HALLS...

    want her voice to be at ease when she tells her story...

    my momma told me to not listen to such things but what she don't know won't hurt her... :rolling:

    mad tight continuation scribe...now y'all stop all that whispering in the ear ova there...
     
  9. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    HOT DAYUMMMM!!

    DON'T Shhhhhh!! HER
    I GOTTA HEAR HER SPEAK MO!!
    SUNSHYNE GURL U BE FLOWIN'
    ON DA REAL...........I HEARD DAT!!:heart:
     
  10. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 14, 2001
    Messages:
    2,616
    Likes Received:
    4
    Occupation:
    Lover of Words
    Location:
    The PeAcH State
    Ratings:
    +4

    D. you are so funny!! thanks for the read... &
    i'll think about not telling your momma that you were
    all ova this piece... :lol: ... thanks again!

    $$RICHNE$$. My Love... you are all all ALL-ways so
    good to me!! :) thank you for the read... i appreciate you!
     
Loading...