Black Poetry : Don't put yo hands on my mama! (For the silent witnesses-the children)

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't put yo hands on my mama again, I said!
    If you do I promise you gonna wish you was dead.
    She's been a **** good mama and a helluva wife.
    You put you hands on my mama and you might be
    ending yo life.

    How you get off with yo old *** cause dependent
    on she you be...
    as long as you living she won't ever be free!

    29 years she decided to stay, but this is the last
    straw and I got something to say.
    You betta treat her like a queen for the rest of her
    days you betta call on Jesus to change your evil
    *** ways.

    She cooking and cleaning and nursing yo ***
    back to health and what you do try to beat
    her to death?
    I'm tired of asking why she stays ...
    she has a mind of her own!
    She has had her career and a husband
    before and all of us kids are now grown.

    But, put you hands on my mama again
    and yo *** is gonna come up gone!
    She's got a Christian spirit and she took
    her vows to heart, but if you hurt my mama
    you gonna get torn apart...

    *For all the children who grew up watching and never had a voice:Domestic violence is not just a crime, it's a sin!!!!!!!!

    Blessings On Ya House!
    BJS(C)2003
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was bloody good, thicker than mud-

    1poetsought ~
     
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    XumAn New Member MEMBER

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    Trully it's a defencive act!
     
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    Word!


    feelin'it souldeep
    Coco
    :heart:
     
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    Excellent poem. I pity and pray for the child that has to go through that. God bless and one love.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed i felt dis don't touch moma !
    so many children go through dis
    a silent prayer for those who cry out in moma's name.....
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you fellow scribes!

    When we realize the damage that we do to the victim, we forget many times that the witnesses is also a victim...
    We must eradicate our domestic issues in order to avoid domestic violence lest it go on into the next generation. And I promise I will speak on this until the day I die....FOR THE CHILDREN!
    THANK YOU
    Blessinsgs On Ya House!
     
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