Black Poetry : "Don't Need Ya' "

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  1. 1hotvirgowoman

    1hotvirgowoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I tricked myself into thinkin', that you were what I needed,
    countless times I smiled, while inside my heart bleeded,
    this roller coaster ride, that I paid my money for,
    took me up ,down & around then hurled me out tha' Door!

    See, I tricked myself into thinkin', that you were what I needed,
    the warning sign ,that I received, I certainly failed to heed it,
    Like my momma Eve, I was deceived but you-you were no Adam
    U were a Serpent-a deceptive merchant-is that why I could not Fathom?

    How I tricked myself into thinkin', that you were what I needed,
    But you played with my heart, and from the start-I should have made u beat it!

    You poisonous, venomous soul-who sucked me of my worth,
    to you I wish the same in depth-may pain be your birth!
    what goes around does come around and you-you ain't no exception,
    may all the bad, come to you for your hurtful world of deception!

    Man-I tricked myself into thinkin', that you were what I needed,
    I reticently gave and you, you took,took all I had, and feasted
    My passion for you burned intense-my eyes, could not hide,
    When you did to me what you did to me-I swear I almost Died!
    That Wednesday morning-I couldn't sleep-On ME I really tried!
    but the thought of you moved me to tears, and soo, I gave in and cried...

    But, you, you REALLY was what I thought, I thought I really needed
    To you, I owe and offer Thanks, even tho I'm drained, depleted
    this little folly made me stronger-a brighter day is in view,
    Iv'e gotten rid of EVERYTHING that reminded me of you,
    I have my thoughts sad to say-I wish to rid those too
    Thank God I wasn't completely silly and got that dumb Tattoo

    On me- you will pay, for all the hurt-the pain that you have caused
    someone who, you thought was true- will definatley be your fall!
    You'll try to wonder, where you went wrong-what is it that you did?
    She'll break your heart, as you did mine, deception is truly a b****


    What Goes Around DOES come Around....
     
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    Intrepid Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice post
    and the statements are so true
    "what comes around goes around"
    take time to heal those memories will rid soon.
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1hotvirgowoman, this piece was moved from the Spoken Word forum, because that forum is for audio and video files.
    This was intensely and vividly written, I could almost see the pain. And yes, karma will come back to bite, in the worse way.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word spoken deep yet heavy well , often one's think they are needed
    but forgot that in time needing comes less wit out an confess
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes it surely does come back around my poet

    yea man don't play the fool


    FOR NOBODY!


    peace
     
  6. Yemoja'sGoddess

    Yemoja'sGoddess Banned

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    Sistah...

    Queen, I feel u words... deep Fiya indeed... I came up with an acronym K.A.R.M.A.~ KEEP ADMIRABLE RAPPORT or MALFUNCTION APPLIES

    Bless:kiss1:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, It's true...
    What goes around , do come back!
    When we throw a boomerang, little do we know ...it's always stamped...
    "Re-Turn to Sender"
     
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    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whew, poet get out of my head. Thank you so much for this scribe it's everything I've been feeling inside.
     
  9. 1hotvirgowoman

    1hotvirgowoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW- Thank You EVERYBODY for your responses!!! I did not realize that releasing one's feelings through Poetry could be so Therapeutic. This was my first time ever doing so-and I must admit- I feel GREAT. Plus, the support I got from you all-goes without saying. Again, Thank You Destee Fam'!
     
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    Preach on

    Girl you better say it. You got me over in my corner sending you Amen and you better preach. God knows been there a time or two. But thank God for the progression of time for i remeber when this would fit my situation oh too well. Lovely scribe poet.
     
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