Black Poetry : don't mention sexual tension

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Kitana, May 22, 2002.

  1. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you said
    you think there's some
    serious sexual tension
    going on between us

    you said
    when you look at me
    all you can see
    is our two bodies
    wrapped around each other
    in a naked love dance~
    so does that mean
    you are having erotic visions
    of you and me entwined sexually
    enjoying each other pleasurably

    you said
    I make you sweat
    and you feel the heat so bad
    it makes you feel "socially uncomfortable"
    so does that mean
    your erection is a reaction
    to the way I move my body
    slowly and sensually

    you said
    I looked that **** good
    you could almost taste me
    and then you ask me
    if anything was on the menu tonight
    cause you just might
    be hungry later
    so does that mean
    you might be interested in
    a snack somewhere around midnight
    something hot and spicy
    served "au naturel"

    you said
    you'd give anything
    to be able to have me for just one night
    that you wanted me so badly
    you could hardly think straight
    so does this mean
    you would like to alleviate
    some of that internal pressure
    and you'd like me to be
    the release valve

    you said
    you'd like the oppurtunity
    to show me how a real man treats a woman
    and make love to me all night long
    then you told me
    it would be
    the best night of my life
    so does this mean
    that all you're looking for
    is a one night stand ~ ****
    and I was just starting to think
    you had possibilities

    (c) nfn 2002
     
  2. Agentshaft007

    Agentshaft007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Been there...felt this

    Oh I know darn well bout this topic hea.:eek:

    I like the way ya put it Boo.
     
  3. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Naw baby not just one night
    Not just a one night stand
    I meant to say
    That if you just give me
    One chance
    One night
    All night
    I will make you mine
    For the rest of all your nites
     
  4. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    get on it Kitana :lol:

    shaz and A007 wish they were some real playaz

    enjoyin' your flows as always

    keep writing :)

    poeticd
     
  5. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    se ya'll up in here laying ot down ........this place is on fiya !!!!!!!
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love the way you set this up.....very tasty morsel and especially nice/nasty coming from the sweat of your pen.... :wink:


    :heart:

    Alyce
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sistah K . i know dis one so well u flip da script and laid
    down something real u go gurl!!!
     
  8. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    007..I think this would have to be a situation we could all find ourselves in at one time or another...thanx for reading me..

    shaz....well yeah, that was what he was supposed to say...:) a gilr needs a little bit of romance every now and then...

    pd...you know how much I appreciate your replies..I'm just havin me some fun here....;)

    Natasha....thanx for taking time out to read what I had to say...much appreciated

    A...this one was a result of memories and conversations with my daughter...and you know how those conversations are sometimes:x:

    Rich...thanx you for feelin what I had to say...glad you enjoyed it...

    K
     
  9. eternalprince

    eternalprince Active Member MEMBER

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    your word usage is beautiful. and you seem to have a strong sense of romance i intend to keep my eyes peeled for you
     
  10. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kitana

    Definitely feeln' the verbage within this piece. You've articulated a "universal" experience here.

    ...Wonderful...

    N2
     
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