Black Poetry : Don't Make No Sense (vibe with me)

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  1. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don’t Make No Sense

    Those were the words you whispered,
    As your hand found the promised land,
    Where the berry isn’t dark,
    But the juices are definitely sweet,
    Your fingers plunge within my basin,
    My nectar plays around your fingers,
    Chasing your cuticles,
    Under your nails.

    “Don’t make no sense”
    You said,
    As you wiped the wetness on my breast,
    I grinned,
    Waiting like a kid in the candy store,
    For the treat you are about to give me,

    I arch my pack as you plunged,
    Deep..,
    Sinking your battleship,
    In my sweet ravine,
    Deeper….,
    Drawing me close,
    Lifting my pelvis,
    Ahh…
    I moan, and loose control,

    “ Don’t make no sense,” I thought.
    You still had a little left in ya,
    And we begged our bodies,
    Strained our muscles,
    Trying to reach extacy one mo’time.
    Slowly,
    Slowly.. we wind down,
    After your determination,
    Was replaced by reality,
    We call a draw.
    Nobody ever wins at this game,
    But we both enjoy the ride.
    I curl up in your arms,
    And replay it all back in a dream.
    I wake up an hour later,
    My ravine is again wet,
    And I’m ready for more,
    I look over at you,
    In your peaceful slumber.
    “It don’t make no sense”
    I don’t have time to do it all again!
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweeter yet than rationalizing love.

    Just do it!

    much luv ~
     
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    Nisa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Woo hooo.. That was hot..got me over here steaming like a crab..deliciously great scribe
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seductive vibe here, in this sensually descriptive piece. Flow on.
     
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    greggy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lawd have mercy! don't make no sense! Delightfully delicious post!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet release here i agree just do it !
    vibe on as i follow
     
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    Good lawd! That is just buh-lazin! :hot:
     
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    Hi and welcome poetic...
    "don't make no sense to drop it like it's hot" ...and you dropped this one, ^5
    and I can truely relate
     
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    :bellydance: Thanks for all the love, and welcome wishes. Ive made my house here, and you all are free to step in and vibe with me @ any time! :bellydance: :bellydance:
     
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