Black Poetry : DON'T LOOK AWAY

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  1. pztvnrg

    pztvnrg Active Member MEMBER

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    We use to play together as children
    I dreamed of partnering with a version
    of you one day
    Well we're all grown-up and
    one day is now

    I see you everywhere I go
    whenever she is near
    You wont even look at me

    Please take a moment to hear me out
    When you only see her
    I feel rejected
    I honor your right to love
    whomever you choose
    Is it possible for you to choose her and still see me?
    Please don't look away...It Hurts




    'note'
    think about it first before responding to your first thought
    thank you
    Peace&1luv
     
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    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    brilliance is at work here.....
    keep'um reach'n sis...

    My pastor once said...

    when you have depth..
    don't succomb to the "surface"
    let those who have depth
    meet you
    for an even exchange..

    Flow on, Flow on...

    8th!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    JUST BEAUTIFULLY DONE HERE
    A POET AT WORK .....YESSSS!
     
  4. pztvnrg

    pztvnrg Active Member MEMBER

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    thank you guys for the reply to don't look away.
    to cindy special thanx to you just for your heart and i don't even know you
    much love my sister
    if you see this post my sister read "DLA" AGAIN. this time
    see it broader with no particular individual in mind
    focus on the beginning and i'll tell you this, it's about relating not a relationship
    PEACE&1LUV TO ALL
     
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    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awww the struggles......well put.
    One_Love
     
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