Black Poetry : Don't Look at Me That Way

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Nov 24, 2003.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't look at me that way.
    That look is intended to start something.
    Something I'm not even ready
    to think about getting started.
    I'm not ready to have those long
    intimate conversations
    about inclinations,
    destinations,
    revelations,
    or proclamations.
    Not ready to be wined,
    dined,
    and entwined,
    by your mind.
    Still not ready for your hands
    to stroke my cheek,
    make me weak,
    hold me tight,
    no, not tonight,
    strip me bare,
    I shouldn't care,
    do me 'til I'm unaware
    of this ring around my finger.
    Why allow myself to linger
    in a love that is now gone.
    Will I ever allow myself to move on?
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaa
    feelin ya vibe u scribe
    da question remain to be known ...
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    posed well...feelin ths vibe indeed...
    the question that is at hand....
    write on poet of the week....:angel1:
     
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    Very Nice

    :flamet: Watzinaname... this is off the hook. Very nice. What a position to be caught in. In a marriage and needing / wanting to move on.
     
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    whoa is this tight! I feel this......I am the one who tries to give the lovins. ;)
     
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    ooooooweeee on fiya :hot: I'm a sucker for the stare down looks as well...lol
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Off the chain, Im into this flo, great job.
     
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    wow
    loving how you scribe
    this wonderful:)
    flow it poet
    Peace
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you're feelin this Rich and Mzblkangel. Thank you. The answer to the question right now is maybe never.
    Thank you Hodee. Perhaps an even more problematic situation is if one person has already emotionally left years ago, and finally decided to physically leave....
    Gempis, Caramelpython, Bluewater--thanks for continuing to make me feel wonderful.
    Triniti424, thanks, and yes, those eyes can be murder sometimes...lol.
     
  10. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmm.

    If all it takes is looks, I gotta get my Prince on. :kiss:

    Loved this.
     
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