Quiet Poetry Lounge : DON'T LET GO

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    While i move slowly
    driven deeper into a place
    I hear yet not speak
    from da space of my quietness
    don't let go (stay) near

    As my beings venture rapidly
    spirit afloat in flyte
    my soul cry out in mumbles
    don't leave me (stay) near me

    for every wet tear upon my trail
    these darken holes i pass
    my treasure of light and dry stall
    awaits me yonder don't let go
    stay near me unconditionally

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    behind my house there is a lake

    that the moon is running its finger across

    my feet in the water, my head in my lap

    the leaves on the maple trees fluting a love song

    my eyes misty and my heart heavy... wondering

    how many times can this man lose his key?

    (Smile)
     
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    don't know but i hope he find it
    because i saw it and know it
    much luv sis ........thanks for the visit
     
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    Hey $$RICH$$, when did you change your name to "he." (smile)
     
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    he is I for him be me.........lol
     
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