Black Poetry : Don't Know

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Mar 19, 2002.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lonesome,
    tired,
    fustrated,
    admired,

    lonely,
    sad,
    fustrated,
    confused,
    negative
    decisions

    choices,
    choices,
    and more choices

    hopeless
    there's no refuge
    i'm filled with constant pain.

    rejected
    brought back to life again

    liberated
    then devastated

    building up
    and then torn down

    my smile
    into a frown

    my joy
    is quiet now

    lifted up
    only to fall down

    can anyone hear me?
    where are you now?
    don't know.

    Desert Storm
     
  2. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you're living poet. that's called
    life. it's a maze that no one's able to
    figure out. look at every situation as an
    opportunity to get better....
    tite thoughts...

    be eazy,
    hw
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stay outta my head, DS...and quit telling ev'ryone 'bout my life.:)

    flow dat.
     
  4. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice scribe here Poet!!

    I dig the flow alot!!
    Thanks!
     
  5. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel you
     
  6. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the ups and downs..to's and fro's...highs and lows....of life..

    hopefully there's more of the ups..to's..and highs..

    K
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    the up and downs of life
    try to stay on the up side as much as possible

    peace
    STORM

    this was so well written

    it speaks
     
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