Black Poetry : dont know

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Sep 12, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel so weird
    and don’t know why
    I want to write but cant…
    Thoughts goin though
    My head so fast..
    Cant write fast enough
    to pen them down…
    Tell me how
    please tell
    how
    I get out of this
    war in my head
    I just write
    and write
    now
    Its like I am at a hault tryin
    To figure out whats goin on
    With me….
    Dodging words
    Ringin in my ear
    Oh me oh my
    Whats going on
    I got the thoughts
    But they wont
    continue to flow…
    Is this the end
    Or a sign of a
    New beginning
    of what I can do…
    the well is dry
    hey whats going on…
    somebody tell me…

    There they go again..oops
    I forgot but I am tryin
    Its getting harder
    I have to think for a flow that
    Use to come so sweet…
    Maybe I need a drink hold up
    Pourin some pepsi…
    Awwwwwww
    Nope
    it aint happen tonight..

    a blkangel thang...:kiss:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    where did da feelings go !
    dis was wit a twist
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it just left
    i can do
    i mean i can say
    oops it aint happen..
    i lost my flow
    tryin but cant
    pullin
    but wont move
    oh me
    oh my
    someone
    please please
    tell me
    whats going on
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Nice..

    Where did your fizzle go. Lost for words, you'll never know. I hope you find the pen. That scribe for you before. We would miss it if you lost it. You know.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my pen maybe
    its broke
    my thoughts
    wont stand its like
    i lost my way..
    oh me
    oh my...
    the fizzle
    for shizle
    see i have no clue...
    i have no gizzle
    see cant even hang...l
    ost my oops went blank..
    thanks for the help
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    still here searchin
    dont know whats goin on
    i lost my way
    oh me
    oh my...
    my pen out of ink
    my mind just sink...
    oh my
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really feel you on this one, sistah. Sometimes it just ain't there. It'll come back, though. Great flow.
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice poem girl...
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i cant write i try so hard..
    my head hurts
    oh me
    oh my i cant wait for
    it to come and stay
    bits and pieces aint
    flowin right
    it may just
    be the pen...
    thanks for the read girl...
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this just aint right
    oh me
    oh my
     
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