Black Poetry : Don't Know Right Now

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  1. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm caught up in the moment,
    where my words don't rhyme,
    and nothing makes sense,
    but to take the time out,
    to let ya'll all know that what i'm feeling right now,
    is unexplainable,
    and you probably won't understand,
    cuz i ain't told you what it is,
    i haven't told you,
    cuz i don't know yet,
    all i know is that,
    i'm caught up in the moment,
    where my words don't rhyme,
    and nothing makes sense,
    but to take the time out,
    to let ya'll all know that what i'm feeling right now,
    is----------------------is-------------------confused,
    do ya'll have those days too?????????
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    understand loud and clear...
    nice flow...seems ya be peepin ova here lol
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed we all do at some point
    just relax back close ya eyes
    open ya mental and answer it all
    within .....
    i feel ya coz i been there and still
    go there time to time..
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes indeed
    that Confusion
    just don't know why
    sometimes
    feeling you on this
    very nice
    Peace
     
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    icandi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes we all have those kind of days
     
  6. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx for the love ya'll--------i didn't know what was going on, all i knew was that i was caught in the moment and didn't know what to say------glad to see i ain't alone on this one.
     
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