Black Poetry : Don't Judge!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Jul 2, 2003.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When we come here, there is a plan.
    Rolled up tight, in the creators hand.
    As he opens, we start our way. The
    threads are black, and are gold some
    days. Let him finish opening his hand.
    Don't go around judging any man!
    Look at the work if you care,
    view our ways if you dare.
    The hand will close, and life is gone.
    Don't spend it caring... about
    what went wrong.
    Remember it's part of the master plan.
    Rolled up tight in the creators hand!

    (c) HODEE...
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow..much love to you...this is a wonderful message in your flow...Peace to you and welcome to our family :)
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice and felt flow...
     
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    good flow...welcome to Destees.....
     
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    [HODEE, welcome to Destee Poetry]

    The master plan of a mastermind
    is the manuscript of His blueprint
    First, His blessings with lessons
    Second, your prayer's recitalia
    Ends failure's memorabilia
     
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    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The master of a poet truth shall not be silence. Your pen the armor of a history.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed this here was awesome
    ya pen speaks loud
    let da ink drip
     
  8. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS ADMIN. AND EVERYONE.

    Everyone on the board is so positive. This brings out the best in anybody. It's hard being positive. Easy being negative. I'm always working on the positive.. it isn't hard anymore. I still got my line of intolerance.. but no need to worry. It's only discrimnation that peaks that point. Unfairness. Put downs.. things like that. I don't start them.. but ain't afraid to jump in on one and tell someone to cut the crap. I saw a post while I was in B.E.T. anasunamun was her name... are you here? See over there I have another tag name.. so don't go there you may see my rants and raves againt injustice.:toast: to everyone on this board....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome ....................
    here we are base on love and peace
    our home is a bless home
    we flow in great pride
    on waves of poetic scribes
    this place is where we bond
    to a positive tune
    happy to have you aboard the family
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feeling the depth your pose in the masterful flow!
     
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