Quiet Poetry Lounge : Don't Go

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MsInterpret, Aug 21, 2010.

  1. MsInterpret

    MsInterpret Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm so sorry you're mad
    My life is just going bad
    I know you are going to leave
    But I don't know the right way to grieve
    I've done nothing wrong
    Be patient
    I'm trying to be strong
    You told me you would never go
    And now you wanna bounce when I'm feeling low
    I've done all I can
    And now I'm left here with out my man
    I'm scared and cold
    And have no one to hold
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    when we down and blue , it's funny how one's will leave u dry
    come-mere honey i'll hold u !


    I feel u on this for real sis because i've been on the other side and left.....
     
  3. PisceanStorm

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    Ur poem do express feeling of not wanting him to go. With all the befor eand after effect.
     
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