Black Poetry : Don't go breaking my heart

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  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don’t you go breaking my heart
    I gave you me
    In good faith
    I trust you to take excellent care
    Of such a precious gift
    To never make me cry
    To never break my heart
    To never ever leave
    To always love me
    To make love to me slowly
    To hold me close when it rains
    I love me
    Don’t go breaking my heart
    Cause I only have the one you see
    God didn’t see fit to give me a back up
    And as a gift from me to you
    Take my heart
    And keep it close
    Take my soul
    And keep it warm
    Take my all
    And in return
    All I ask
    All I need
    Is a promise
    Please
    Don’t go breaking my heart

    Natasha
     
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    BABY GIRL!

    Love doesn't come with guarantee's and sometime it comes with joy and pain...but as gifted and intelligent as you are...any man can see that you are a star...worthy to be loved and treated like a QUEEN, so be careful and accept nothing less than a KING.
    As my darling intended said to me while I was fussing and crying and swearing that no other man would I cry over...he reminded me of something that I know is true..."Someone once cried over you!" So sometimes we will cry and fuss and fight, but always make up before the night! God will give you what you need and in due time you will succeed....
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
    LOVE TO YOU ALWAYS MY SISTA OF THE PEN!
     
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    as long as you know what you need than you should accept nothing less
    but sometimes i guess a sister needs to spell it out for those who can't read
     
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    one can't break that beautiful heart of your
    worry not forth i promise i won't do that to u
    but i will
    give u what u need
    be their when u need
    be as gentle
    caress u wit care
    sure i'll be right their....:heart: :kiss: :heart:
     
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    Great piece Natasha. I know I felt this way at the beginning of my present relationship after being hurt so many times. I can totally relate.
    Nice.
    *Emma*
     
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    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl...put it out there! if the brotha is sincere, even if he does do something stupid that hurts you, you'll know it wasnt intentional!
    Girl, like I advised somebody from another poem...you cannot get anything out of a relationship that you are not putting in...enjoy it.
     
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    broken heart can be mended,
    by true love and compassion
    a tender heart can heal the
    oldest of painful wounds;

    your heart was broken by
    lessons learned and the
    one who never understood
    the true worth within you;

    allow trust to be your healer
    making room for a new joy
    for as long as pain covers your
    eyes, completion never appears;


    you have crafted much in your scribe so i send to you the embrace of one who knows both sides of a broken heart...there's healing in the waters of the meadow but trust comes from within...

    one.
     
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