Black Poetry : Don't Get Weary

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MsHendrix, Nov 30, 2005.

  1. MsHendrix

    MsHendrix Member MEMBER

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    Sweet Africa
    Divine Mother Land
    Great wisdom remains concealed in your bosom
    Constant thoughts of should've, could've, would'ves
    dwelling in the mind of these unknown
    ancestors of mine.

    Fret not the things of the past
    They are just that.... in the past
    Defined as : having existed or taken place in a period before the present
    Rejoice in memory of days gone by
    If the past never exist, how would you know how high to aim in the future?

    Keep in mind that Everything happen for a reason!

    God had the ability of transforming tainted evil into prosperous blessings...
    Think about it...
    You stole me and mine from our and and brought us to dwell amongst you and yours
    We've been blessed with a striving urge
    Me and mine have excelled and pulled down all of your strongholds
    Is that all you got?
    Take that back to the drawing board

    Words of Wisdom: When a man's ways please God, his enemies will be at peace.

    With that being said... Peace Be Still!
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MsHendrix

    Beautiful. I really enjoyed this peace.

    But, uhhh ruhh, you put it in the wrong forum. :D

    nice poem though. :toast:
     
  3. MsHendrix

    MsHendrix Member MEMBER

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    *embarassed*

    Oops! Sssshhh Don't Tell Anyone And Maybe No One Will Notice! hehehehe
     
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    No matter how many blows we receive,we still somehow remain standing. And iliked the way you ended this, yes, no wonder they are at piece. Well written scribe.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome piece , tyte flow dig this.
     
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    Well spoken poet
    This is a very thoughtful frop
    Much Love
     
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    Hi MsHendrix
    So please to feel your flow
    What can one do with the past
    but learn from it..it can't be change
    very awesome drop
    Keep the flow flowing

    Peace
     
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    what you speak is the truth. love the flow on poet.:wave: :fairy:
     
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