Black Poetry : Don't Get Mad Cuz I said 'not tonight'!!

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  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I work a nine to five, twenty-four-seven
    And when I come home all you want to do is love makin'
    Don't give me time to take off my shoes
    Don't give me time to say 'how do you do?'
    All you want me to do is please you
    Well, you know what? F**k you
    No offense but everyday I please you
    I mean, sure we live together
    But give me a break bruh, that really doesn't matter
    Cuz if that was the case I would make you get down on your knees twenty four seven when I'm the most stressed and make me feel better
    Through sun shine or bad weather
    Feel me, so don't you dare get mad cuz I said 'not tonight'

    Yeah, I feel your hands inching up my legs
    Yeah, I hear your moans and begs
    But did you just hear what I said?
    'Not Tonight!!!'
    I don't want to argue and fight
    Promise I'll make it up to you tomorrow aiight
    Make you go to places that are far out of sight
    Make your every wrong right
    But 'Not Tonight'

    If I gave you some right now you wouldn't want it
    There wouldn't be a moan or groan as you hit it
    Just silence cuz I'm too tired to fake it
    Not that I do that a lot cuz we both know you know how to work it
    but on nights like tonight I previously did it
    There wouldn't be any grinds
    Cuz that would take to much time
    All you would have to work on is my blink face that would wish you to get from my behind

    If you did it RIGHT now, I probably wouldn't even feel it
    So, 'Not tonight', is not just because I'm not in the mood
    Or because my period is due
    It's because I'm tired and I really can't see myself pleasing you
    Or visa versa, so please don't get mad cuz I said 'not tonight.'
    Not tonight, is not to just get you out the mood
    It's just to say, 'I can't please you.'
    At least, 'not tonight.' boo

    Dedicated to Anthony....love ya baby.
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    boy can i relate to this ish. flow on gurl.
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL.. RITE RITE...
    SUMTIMES WE JUST NEED A LIL CATERIN TO
    WITHOUT N E SEX..
    HOW BOUT A FOOT RUB OR 2
    BUBBLE BATH N PIZZA WILL EVEN DO..
    SHOOO
     
  4. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol, ya'll crazy but it's clear ya'll got the message posed here. LOL. Thanks for replying and as always thanks for givin me love family.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    too often this playout in a household
    give more then the sex but the affection
    and attention needed , a smile or hello will do !
    feel you sis..
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel u on this.
    I think I said these exact same words
    to an ex of mine.
    Love this to the core.
     
  7. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks fam for feeling this. As always much love sent back towards you.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Anyone can get tired sometimes, right? A gentle touch and some warm cuddling can go on long way. I feel you on this, sometimes it just isn't personal. Like the way you laid this down.
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    dang

    ANT NEED TO STEP UP HIS GAME
    IT SOUNDS ONE-SIDED

    BUT SERIOUSLY
    ANT NEEDS TO RECOGNIZE YOUR FEELING AND NEEDS AS WELL

    GOOD LUCK
     
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