Black Poetry : Don't Flinch

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Aaliyahmonet, Feb 17, 2003.

  1. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U keep on hesistatin every time i ask u a question,
    Won't u stop playin dat scary type, don't flinch,
    Every time i look at u, u get all nervous and s***,
    U think i'ma do something, ***** don't flinch,
    When i wanna kick it wit u, u don't wanna do nothin,
    What's da matta *****, why u frontin,
    Can i chill out witcha or somethin,
    Seems to me that u be beatin around da bush,
    Why u dissin me like this,
    What did i do, to cause u such commotion,
    When we go to da mall, u don't act right,
    U got dis crazy attitude dats controllin yo mind,
    When we go out to da show, u seem all distant and stuff,
    I'm bout to tell ya *****, i just about had enuff,
    U need some help, i tried to be there 4 ya, but ya know,
    I can't handle this no mo,
    U gotta change, speak up sometimes, don't sit there actin shy,
    U know u ain't like dat, so don't even try to lie,
    U my guy, u cool peeps, but on da real,
    U have to shape up, act cool, and just relax,
    Why are u actin dis way,
    No its not ok, is something wrong,
    Sit down and lets talk,
    I know something is on yo mind,
    But don't try to hide yo feelings inside,
    U know i'm not gonna give up on u,
    I'm lookin out 4 ya,
    Da best i know how,
    Now when i asked u those questions,
    Why did u flinch?

    AM
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  2. Legacy21

    Legacy21 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can definitely feel this. I HATE when a friend or a man I am kicking it with refuses to communicate with me, and seems to have their mind everywhere else, but on me or you know they are troubled but they just keep everything bottled inside. It's so frustrating it makes you want to scream, but something keeps you trying to help them even in all their reticience because you care. So I am diggin this flow forreal. Peace.
     
  3. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    4 sho legacy i definitely feel ya. :)

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  4. poeticdelight

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    nice one Aaliyah

    read this one earlier

    he'll spill it eventually if not then you may need
    to drag it out of him

    peace

    poeticd

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  5. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks poeticdelight:) U right about dat:)

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