Black Poetry : don't feel bad

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ladybug, Feb 4, 2002.

  1. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    please don't............what's that?
    oh feel sorry for me
    cause i choose my situation with intent to keep my dignity

    pleae don't............oh what's that?
    feel sorry for me
    because i choose to be loved but can't properly so then
    CHOOSE to love myself instead of be subjected to this ridiculous self-pity known as love ....
    hmm i'll pass (snikle)

    so baby pleae don't..........yes feel bad
    because truthfully i am sad not at my own cirmustances
    but of your situations of loving what was not meant
    and accepting what is never giving
    and coming to me for comfort for where "other significants"
    turn the other cheek but when it comes to me, myself and I
    DON'T


    pleaseeeeeeee

    Feel bad..........
    for you that is
     
  2. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl....that is right on the money! You tell him sista!
    I'm feelin that 4 sho
    1luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well shut my mouth!

    u broke it down to the main key
    da misused love thang but do blow him away
    coz ya heart felt love to love ya self is greater:eek:
     
  4. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was cold but good! Very unique angle indeed. Keep being real.
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow! Tight piece. :)

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOOWEEEE!!! You came on strong with this one here! Thanx for the read.
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LB...

    Kick that flow Queen!!!

    Nice piece...

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  8. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...

    hope he feels better after this one :jawdrop:
     
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