Black Poetry : Don't Fall In Luv

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  1. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    have you ever fallen in luv,
    but knew they didn`t care?
    have u ever felt like cryin`,
    but knew you'd get nowhere?
    have u ever watched them walk away...
    not wanting them 2 go?
    and u whispered I luv u softly...
    not wanting them 2 know?
    u cried all night in a misery,
    and almost went insane.
    there`s not 2 many things in this world,
    that can cause so much pain.
    if i could choose between luv & death
    i think i`d rather die.
    luv is fun, but it hurts 2 much
    and tha price u pay is high.
    so i say, don`t fall in luv,
    u`ll b hurt b4 it`s thru.
    u c my friend, i ought 2 know,
    i fell in luv w/ u...

    Dedicated to you if you have to ask who you are you'll probably never know thanks for just being you I luv you
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is beautiful!! and so heartfelt....i know those feelin's all too well...
     
  3. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :) thanks girl I can always count on you to send me some luv and I hope you know I'm sending it right back much luv sistah girl :):)
     
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    I loved this short and sweet and lovely
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This tugs on the heart strings
    like a champ.
    Peace and love to ya
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi serenti-poet....we all feeling this...Let it flow..let it flow..let it flow
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now gurl ya on point
    so sweet warm & heartfelt flow
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Home is where the heart is, but my heart isn't her
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    hey girl, long time no read lol. nice flow...
     
  9. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW

    I can feel you on this level. I feel the same way. Great poem.
    One_Love
     
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    Serenti, this poem shot straight though the heart...echoing the sentiment of all who have traveled the road, I'd say don't fall in love either...but it's so inevitable. Love this flow!
     
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