Black Poetry : ...Don't Cry...Don't Feel...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    these are jus some random thoughts of past and present experiences...

    you...
    search and search to find happiness in others
    and...
    you're still left empty because you want another
    but...
    on the outside looking in you can see they don't need you
    cuz...
    it looks like they've found happiness without you
    so...
    you try not to cry and try not to feel
    but...
    the more you ignore the more its too real
    and...
    you try your best to move on without them
    its...
    the worst feeling in the world to want another but you can't have them...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes that is one of the worse feelings in the world, and you expressed it so well. Feeling this vibe.
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks alot:)
     
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    Hi Lovely
    Oh this is so sad
    no matter how
    hard we try
    it still kind of hurt
    for a little while in time
    it do fade after awhile

    Much Love sis


    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    how i know this so well and felt the temptation to lone
    yet only to not be able to have that someone ...........
    yes u expressed somethings i feel and know so well.

    Keep stroking that pen and speak to my mental
     
  6. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    can i get an amen to that?lol. yes, def. the worst feelin in the world,especially when there is a strong bond involved..can u tell i've been there. keep ya head up.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    true happiness is found within
    people not all people but people will always let you down
    that's just the way it is in the BIG CITY
    but don't frown
    there is alot love out there
    finding it is the hard part
    things happen for a reason
    trust me on that

    peace poet

    DSS
     
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