Black Poetry : Don't be a hater

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by tab, Jun 18, 2003.

  1. tab

    tab Member MEMBER

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    I though you were the one for me
    I guess I was wrong
    You showed me the bad side of what I hate
    Can you be true
    I guess not
    Here I am
    There you are
    Playing games with my heart
    Don't you know that it hurts
    Oh I forgot you don't care
    Why you still here
    Up my a** about sh**
    Can't you leave and be gone
    Oh I forgot you're stuck to me
    While unstick yourself
    Don't need no excess trash
    That's what you get you son of a B****
    for doing me wrong
    Put up with to much sh**

    To all the haters don't you know that wrong
    Don't treat you peoples like that they deserve mor then that
    Treat you peoples like family
    If you're a hater you don't belong here
    So get your a** out of my rap

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    tab
     
  2. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man..I am sesnig sumone did sumthin to ya....Just hold on .. :) Great scribe
     
  3. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is tyte I luv the vibe your sendin I like this one hope to read many more from you until next time

    keep flowin
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling you here nothing but love 4 ya !
    dis flow speaks out
     
  5. PurpleMoons

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    Nope! no haters here. Just family. Tyte piece!
     
  6. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome,
    Feeling your flow.... Nice piece keep expressing yourself and keeping it real!!

    AqueenPassing
    :wave:
     
  7. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    do I sense a bit of hostility?? LOL...Sometimes you just gotta let it out, I understand...keep it up...

    Nahshon
     
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