Black Poetry : dont' ask , don't ask

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MORE, Apr 15, 2003.

  1. MORE

    MORE Banned MEMBER

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    when it comes to advice
    better think twice
    before u pose ur problem

    cuz folks dive in
    starving for the information
    pretend not to care
    temporary dedication

    not caring to solve it.

    girl just leave him
    boy u shudda known
    they shout accusations

    but never visited my hearts
    home.

    why are u crying
    get over it now
    sweep up the pieces
    they all shout aloud.

    why are u so weak
    wallowin in your pain
    their mouths watering
    for more, like salts in
    their veins.

    now don't yall
    sit there with your az
    on your back
    like u don't remember
    loves pain, and anxiety attacks!

    don't point your finger
    at me, saying i'm this and
    that, say u've been there
    then hell act like it , shat!

    making me feel worse
    like my pain don't matter
    i'm just blowin out vapors
    inborn, unresolvable chit chatter

    naw, this is real
    like beans and rice
    not ghost in the movies
    or stories by vincent price.

    pain, broken real as concrete
    upset cuz my love failed
    and no longer loves me
    upset because now
    i'm huggin the air
    wishing things could work
    out, maybe it will
    to soon to tell.

    don't u sit there
    all priss and prim
    saying u waitin on god
    but can't send me
    words from him?

    get out of here
    this is why the very reason
    love doesn't work
    cuz folk fill up with treason

    and will help u with your bags
    but won't put ur food away
    never ask for advice on love
    just do what ur heart say.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed tyte scribe
     
  3. MORE

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    THANK YOU, AS ALWAYS.
     
  4. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice. You get my props and respect. Your right too... always listen to you heart b/c poeple only know the situation and not the pain you facin,
    1 love
    SwtNess
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

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    Nicely scribed!

    I'm feelin' your flow

    souldeep
    Coco
    :heart:
     
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    i like it! i hate it when ppl say this mess to me too...so fake
     
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    forget them
    if they want to act priss and prim
    peace
    khasm
     
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