Black Poetry : Done (My final farewell)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soulful2006, May 12, 2005.

  1. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm done with you and your ways
    i don't get why you can't see the
    errors of your ways
    It makes no sense to me
    So this is my decree
    I claim independence
    I'm complete without you
    This does not mean I don't love you
    I just love myself too
    So you won't be ruining my life anymore
    The welcome mat has been lifted from the door
    This is something you never knew before
    Goodbye
    I'm done

    :peace: :hearthis: :hot: :shutup:

    Sometimes the best endings are the not so nice ones.
     
  2. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I definatley hear that...i been thru it to...the hardest,but best t hing to do is walk away and dont look back....

    nice lil ditty here....good luck with everything ,..stay strong bruh...

     
  3. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the reply but I'm a lady I know I don't refer to my gender alot but now you know. :hearts3:
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh...sorry...but i still must repeat....

    I definatley hear that...i been thru it too...the hardest,but best thing to do is walk away and dont look back....

    nice lil ditty here....good luck with everything ....stay strong sista....u will one day find a man like me.....lol... :blowkiss:
     
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    i hear you nice flow its also healing nice write poet
     
  6. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks

    lurks thank you for the love and I am certain that I
    willfind the good man that every sistah deserves forme
    in the mean time I will keep my eyes to the skies for the
    ultimate prize.
     
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    miss-no-love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    go head and do ya thing, this is a great poem for people who are going throu gh tough luv.
     
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    Sometimes U have 2 let go of the things U love most...

    It all makes 4 a better U.

    Peace.
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Truly wise thank
    you for the insight
    I'd like to think that growth is
    natural part of life
     
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    re:Done

    Excellent! One know when enough is enough. :getout:
     
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