Black Poetry : Don’t throw blind darts at fine arts and wine could spark

MADDRAPPER

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Don’t throw blind darts at fine arts and wine could spark
Feelings have you in the dark revealing yourself from
The hardcore depth of your soul //
A pimp sees hate then attempt to debate on prices of that
Juicy coo-chee with loosely fitting tongue while you sprung
Don’t believe him //
Live in a dimention of danger pay attention to stranger
You can get jacked for your stack while in a Cadilac and
That’s bad and whack losing cash while cruising pass with
Gun in your face not fun a disgrace //
 
well to be honest....I didn't like it.....

Live in a dimention of danger pay attention to stranger
You can get jacked for your stack while in a Cadilac and <<<<<<<first part=no sense
That’s bad and whack losing cash while cruising pass with
Gun in your face not fun a disgrace //

yo i been rhyming for a while....just work on ya rhyme scheme...

and multies-more than one rhyming word in a bar......i liked the flow....the rest was iight.....(just opinions)..
 

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