Black Poetry : Don’t throw blind darts at fine arts and wine could spark

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don’t throw blind darts at fine arts and wine could spark
    Feelings have you in the dark revealing yourself from
    The hardcore depth of your soul //
    A pimp sees hate then attempt to debate on prices of that
    Juicy coo-chee with loosely fitting tongue while you sprung
    Don’t believe him //
    Live in a dimention of danger pay attention to stranger
    You can get jacked for your stack while in a Cadilac and
    That’s bad and whack losing cash while cruising pass with
    Gun in your face not fun a disgrace //
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt dis speak out flow on bruh....
     
  3. AfRiCaNrOoTs5o

    AfRiCaNrOoTs5o Active Member MEMBER

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    well to be honest....I didn't like it.....

    Live in a dimention of danger pay attention to stranger
    You can get jacked for your stack while in a Cadilac and <<<<<<<first part=no sense
    That’s bad and whack losing cash while cruising pass with
    Gun in your face not fun a disgrace //

    yo i been rhyming for a while....just work on ya rhyme scheme...

    and multies-more than one rhyming word in a bar......i liked the flow....the rest was iight.....(just opinions)..
     
  4. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HEY RICKH THANKS FOR THE PROPS

    AfRiCaNrOoTs5o NEED TO LEARN A LITTLE STREET TALK NOT ALL ABOUT RHYME THAT WAS SO CLEAR AND PRECISE FEEL ME?
     
  5. AfRiCaNrOoTs5o

    AfRiCaNrOoTs5o Active Member MEMBER

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    nah i don't need to learn any street talk dun.....but i just stated my opinion iight man..
     
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    break it up fellaz....
    all flows are respected here....
    african...if you do not have something nice to say
    then move on to the next poem....check the poetic ettiquette for refrence
    one love
    khasm
     
  7. AfRiCaNrOoTs5o

    AfRiCaNrOoTs5o Active Member MEMBER

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    iight....i'll squash it.....but i don't like him trying to tell me what do.......just because i'm new......he did what he did deliberately......
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well hey i don't get credit much only a few people but yo think my stuff be tight know why I hear some of my rhymes being used in CD'S every day so somebody love it enough to use it
     
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