Black Poetry : Don’t Slay the Dream Weaver

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don’t Slay the Dream Weaver.

    In the heart of a man is the do all he can.
    To create from the salt of the earth.

    He is designed with persuasion.
    To make something amazing
    Out of nothing with the touch of his hand.

    Either single or wed.
    He must keep a clear his head
    Focused on right and have peace at home.
    No matter the threat he isn’t finished yet.
    Until he dies and returns to the sand.

    Don’t destroy the design of a man and his mind
    Not by conflict, badger and pain
    Thru his soul and a persuasive mate
    With whom he is able to relate
    The dream weaver
    Can reach for the stars

    A woman is smart and has a loving heart
    Sees the weaver in his prime
    His glory and grace
    If she takes on his will
    To guide and to build
    He will die in her eyes
    Sat his fate

    So if he dies look for the cause
    Anchor that holds him in pause
    You’ll find his heart and his will to create.
    Don’t slay your dream weaver and ask him to perform
    Cause now for the two it’s to late
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u said a mouth full here , many need to relate
    Don't slay the dream weaver indeed ...tyte on point drop bruh H.
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hodee

    ahhh im so caught up with this. flow on my brotha!:luvv:
     
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    Slaying the dream weaver is just as awful as a beautiful dream that's never realized. This was intense poet.
     
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    Hi Brother Hodee
    You are a weaving
    He is designed with persuasion.
    To make something amazing
    Out of nothing with the touch of his hand.

    wow these lines just took be there
    wonderful flow poet :)

    Peace
     
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    Indeed the echo from this needs to be heard.....

    tyte Drop brother...........keep flowin'!!
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man
    That was deep
    Felt this one

    Quote-(Don’t destroy the design of a man and his mind
    Not by conflict, badger and pain)-Nice flow poet
     
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