Black Poetry : Doing Without

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Apr 22, 2003.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Without God...
    Without fear

    Without me...
    Without you

    Without sex...
    Without men

    Without kith...
    Without kin

    Without loss...
    Without costs

    Without lust...
    Without trust

    Without greed...
    Without debt

    Without sin...
    Without death

    Without care...
    Without sight

    Without truth...
    Without light

    Without gain..
    Without rain

    Without hurt...
    Without pain


    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
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    WITH GOD
    I HAVE EVERYTHING
    I CAN DO WITHOUT
    ALL ELSE......

    TIGHT WORK!:jumping:
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like the style....and there is truth to ur words...
     
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    without dis
    without flow

    without love
    without hope

    without him
    without her

    with GOD
    with foreverness

    tyte vibe u scribe here i love ya flow
     
  5. SayinWhatUCant

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    dig it........
     
  6. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Without all of you, I am left empty-
     
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    Definitely feeling this piece! :)
     
  8. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, Indys Finest!

    1poetsought ~
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin this piece right here poet!! :) peace and blessins keep flowin
     
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    beautiful piece. Without God I dont want to breath!
     
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