Black Poetry : Doing Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SensualReality, Mar 26, 2004.

  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DOIN’ IT

    Am I wrong because I’d rather where my reeboks,Aeropostale hip huggin’ jeans,and old navy tank top.
    Than to fit into a pair of tight Fendi Capri pants and high heeled boots?
    “Naw no ma’am you ain’t wrong”
    See me coming you shake your head,”Why that young lady ain’t got on no panty hose?”
    I’ll answer you,”Because my legs are beautiful and they don’t need to be hidden because a young man can’t stop his eyes ah watching me walk by or clamp a brown thick thigh over it’s twin……same brown thickness.”
    “Yes em’ you are beautiful do ya thing.”
    Am I not normal because I’d rather read a book perhaps write one about Shakespeare,love and sweet misery
    Than to shake my behind on an overcrowded dance floor with the same folk I see at the mall(gets tired) at school(gets tired)
    “Naw no ma’am you ain’t strange”
    What if I want to wear my hair wild and kinky reaching for the sky,no chemicals such as conk after lye
    Just me all me,different style skirts reaching the floor and helping my cinnamon sticks breathe
    “Yes em’ you are beautiful do ya thing.”
    Then why must I be judged for doing,looking, and saying how and what I feel?
    When I’m just being different,defining myself I’m not lying to you I’m keeping it real.
    “Well ma’am everybody has their opinions
    deal with it,and do ya thing,miss do ya thing
    do it til’ you can’t no mo’ do it just do it.”
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome to destee.com
    nice flow enjoyed the read
    hope to see more
    Peace
    Angel
     
  3. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You

    :thanks:for the love and welcoming me
     
  4. LYriCaL-pAsSioN

    LYriCaL-pAsSioN Member MEMBER

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    FYAH

    liked dis! yo flow is hot :hot: ..keep em' comin n welcome to destee.com hope u enjoyin yo new home & yo fambly! lol
    flow on
    ))**WUN**((
    _*LYriCaL-pAsSioN*_
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done wit heated flava tyte
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Differences makes somefolks open their mouths in harsh ways, that's their problem though. Be yourself, and love yourself. I really liked the way you wrote this, and welcome to destee!!!
     
  7. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for liking my poetry and making me feel welcome
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi:wave:welcome
    feeling this scribe
    you have compose
    flow on
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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