Black Poetry : Does this make sense?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Jul 8, 2007.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Does this make sense?
    Managing to fight the inner battles
    To let loose an element
    Our hearts
    Are won over by history
    Having known one another
    Creates a comfortable energy

    Gratifying
    The pleasure….

    Mutually, agreed

    Silently unspoken

    All together knowingly…

    Pausing

    With moments of silence…

    Does this make Sense?

    Desert Storm
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    makes alot of sense

    silence is a great power

    when you can hear yourself

    and your inner peace has a calm silence

    is a beautiful thing

    peace

    DS
     
  3. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    True Dat

    Taking time to sort all of that out is a beautiful thing too. Thanks for stopping by.

    DS
     
  4. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Desert Storm:
    Nice write. I have been finding
    myself asking that same question
    about a lot of things lately.

    Much Luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    makes sense to me awesome scribe
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sure does makes sense, and as I did, I felt a feeling of warmth. Digging your vibes.
     
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