Black Poetry : DOCTOR LOVE

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Doctor feel good
    the love of hand
    touching deeply
    caressin
    feedin love
    comfort to da soul
    bring warmth when
    ya feelin cold

    Doctor Love
    in the morning
    like first light
    pleasin
    fulfillin
    the heart
    sweet in the
    noon day
    like lunch
    to munch on
    da love is good
    and sweeter at
    night
    Doctor love come
    and make it alright

    from flyte tonight
    open ya heart
    feel da deep
    touch of my love
    as it work within
    open ya mental
    as it press to da
    head and give a
    love rush
    let the doctor
    work on u
    and make u new
    feel da sweep of
    my hand
    caressin
    pleasin
    feelin
    24 hours u be new
    from a love so true

    making house calls now ! :huh:
     
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    A nice and smooth piece you got here. The words went together nicely, which made it easy for the reader to read. This would make a nice spoken word joint.

    one luv
     
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    $$RICH$$, you are so cute. This is dope, but baby, you already know you are doctor love around these parts.
     
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    thankz mind_$oul i will drop it friday in open mic .

    hey olakuoto.....
    love Doctor
    will see u now
    where do it hurts
    if it ya heart
    i mend wit perfection
    if it's ya head
    i get deep in ya mental
    if it ya love
    i pull in grasp tight
    and caress ya
    wit comfort
    if ya lips dry
    i moist wit kisses
    of wet blisscription
    da doctor of love
    u want dis visit
    to fill ya prescription
    my love is a ummm!!
    da feel good in da morning
    so tell me what bothers u ?
     
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    i likes this

    dig dat..doctor feel good...
    doin house calls
    Doctor can ya help me????
    i get over joyed then it goes
    away just like a rollercoaster
    then when its bright it gets dark..
    mind be trippin but this
    pain i cant seem to explain
    dont know where
    it comes from
    sort of sad but happy
    alone but among friends..
    cold at night but warm
    during the day...
    heart races...breath taken
    funny feeling inside but
    i dont know why
    can the dear good doctor help me...??? :spin:
     
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    sit right here
    as the Doctor
    make u feel good
    under the rapture
    i lay this prescription
    of love
    to hold u at night
    make u know it's
    alright
    feed ya body the
    bliss of pill
    that will thrill & chill
    caress ya na na 's
    and enter ya thoughts
    i am the med
    to work u right
    make u feel my
    tingle delight
    yes i have a potion
    4 U......this way to my office or i make house calls !!
     
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    your doctor love flow
    have touch my heart
    feeling better with every line
    you are the doctor
    who got the medication
    you hit me with cupid arrows
    i feel much better
    as i scroll each line
    the doctor of love
    the wonder medicine
    the cure of love.
    Peace
     
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    you so multi-talented my brotha lol
    poet, lover, doctor...what will you conquer next lol
     
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    making house calls
    curing heart broken pain
    mending just da same
    making ya feel good
    da Doctor in da house
    caressin minds
    rub down to bodies
    comforting souls
    Dr..feelgood rolls
    when needed call
    thanx sis...
     
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    **** were can i find a doctor like that! im feelin kind of "sick!"lol
    GOD BLESS :angel1:
     
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