Black Poetry : Do you...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Chastity, Mar 19, 2004.

  1. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do You

    Do you,
    Take this woman,
    Just as she is,
    Without trying to shape or mold,
    To have and to hold,
    Against your skin,
    And allow true feelings,
    To ripple from within,
    And to finally bring some healing,
    To my disabled display of affection.
    Do you,
    Take this woman,
    To be someone of value,
    In spite of what others may have told you,
    In spite of how I scolded myself,
    During my not so pleasant seasons,
    And how I attempted to get you to see my reasons.
    Do you,
    Take this woman,
    To be your partner,
    In life, in the sheets,
    The intersection,
    Where fantasy and reality meets.
    The fulfiller, the thriller,
    The blower of your mind,
    The best lover you could ever find,
    To be the one that never leaves you,
    Throughout the test of time.
    Do you?

    You do?

    But do I…

    Let you.
     
  2. justbnme03

    justbnme03 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this i really like, very nice
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Will you? Takes a lot of trust to let someone in. I liked the feel of this drop.
     
  4. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, this is tight, girl. And good ending. I enjoy your work.
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dang!!

    when my eyes & mind
    drink in your creative ink
    I am never disappointed.
    It is always peace!


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome scribing love how it was done