Black Poetry : Do you still Dream of me?

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  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do you still Dream of me?

    Do you make me wear that red slip with heels?
    Do I make you moan out in pleasure?
    Do I smile Like I'm in Love?
    Do I stop lookin for that tape measure?

    Do you still dream of.....

    us "Making Love"?
    Do you put my face on your girl when you're on top?
    Do you still wish she was me?
    Do you still want to love me til I pop?

    Do you still......

    think that I'll be coming back?
    Go through the old pictures of us?
    Do you toss and turn at the thought of me?
    Do you wish that you could regain that old trust?

    Do you.....

    Still act like what happened was a mistake?
    Do you even remember what you put me through?
    Do you imagine Lots of "What If's" and "IF So"s
    Do you think about what would be if I never left you?

    Do .......
    People still think about the "Scandelous Affair"?
    Does your mother remind you about it everyday?
    Did she tell you you blew a prefect relationship?
    That I'm the one you let "slip away"?

    Tell me baby........

    Do you still dream of me?

    ......I'll tell you a little secret.....

    I don't dream of you
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Swt-T, girl turning into a woman......."I don't dream of you", nice flow.
     
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    i think u've been readin' my journal! lol..this was tyte:)
     
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    Thats Hot! loved it swtT! you laid this piece! and laced it too!
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey SwtT,

    This is a tyte piece!! Glad to see you're moving on!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    yes....I still dream of you when sleep comes....usually he is out looking for you...but every once in a while he comes back exhausted from his search..and when I finally rest my eyes...you appear..looking like the first time I laid my eyes upon you...my heart skips a beat as your beauty graces my pressence...the pain I caused you...brings tears to my eyes...as I fall on my knees...begging for your to forgiveness...the guilt I live with is killing me...but just as you appear you disappear...taking my sleep and my dreams with you....

    Much Love
    Rico
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Angelic- Thank you very much

    Lovely- Yeah, a few peeps into it :x Thanks :)

    Purple-Thank you so much I'm glad you liked it

    Sierra-Thank you, this one isn't about me though :)

    Rico- Get on your knees again n beg...:mad: :) Im jus kiddin Playa. Thanks for the reply P.S...you'll never get andy sleep if you keep up with it...you know what im talkin about ....LoL
     
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    Dayum gyrl light it up like what! this was fire...just HOT!!
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Triniti:)
     
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    dream of notions not to be
    but do u still dream of me
    tyte scribe u been doing homework i c .......

    love dis one
     
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