Black Poetry : Do You Remember

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by charleshandy, May 5, 2002.

  1. charleshandy

    charleshandy Active Member MEMBER

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    REMEMBER

    Do you remember when you vowed.
    You never fall in love again.
    You said you will keep as a simple ****.
    And you should never have no man.

    You said all man are dogs and all we do is lie.
    We cheat on all our good women uh! you wonder why.
    AND do you rember the very first time you felt pain.
    But how can you fell the water if there were never no rain.

    Now the tables has turn you no longer fell alone.
    You say you are happy with him,and you never .
    Will like to be alone.

    Sometimes words can't express the way one fells.
    And we have the tendecy for taken one for granted.
    But women also cheats,and tell their lies.
    They hurt us good men and sometime makes us cry.


    I once to said I will never fall in love again.
    But somehow lonliness took control of me.
    And made me see that their are some good women.
    Aswell as men it's how we chose them.

    So when you find someone you can truely trust.
    And truely understand be patience with them.
    Because you made more than a mate.
    you also made a freind,do you remember.
     
  2. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice read , hope to hear more real soon!
    Check the spelling on Feels, thats all.
    No harm intended, it was a very beautiful and truthful poem.
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE
     
  3. charleshandy

    charleshandy Active Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for your reply sorry about my spelling be more careful next time


    thank you
    msluciousb
     
  4. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    This is very nice ... CharlesHandy where ya 'et ???

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was smooth i like .......keep flowin whoa!
     
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    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very true words, and I felt the heart behind them.
     
  7. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i agree with gaylee..........
    and .its not a sexe thing
    a lie and cheating apears in any kind of human...
    it is just not a good thing......
    like this piece.
     
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