Black Poetry : Do you Remember?

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When you walk down that road alone
    And you finally notice, I did love you
    All I ask is…Remember me

    When you need that friend
    Just to talk too
    Remember me

    When you’re lost and alone
    And can’t find your way back
    Remember me

    When you’re searching and wondering
    Trying to understand the why
    Remember me

    Once my love grew it grew deep
    But you was not around to notice
    You turned your back
    Remember ?

    See….
    I was the one that always held your hand
    No, matter the doubt or the shame
    But just …Remember me

    I carried the storm for both of us
    And you ran and hide
    Remember ?

    Well baby…
    How you meet me...is not how you left me
    Remember me...

    I stood by with faith
    When you had none
    Remember me

    You showed me I could love...again
    Building my trust just to let me down
    Do you remember me?

    The one you claimed you love?
    The one you hurt and made cry
    Do you? Well no, you closed your eyes
    And left me in pain…Remember?

    However, after a while
    I remembered me
    And walked away

    Still loving you
    But you will never know
    Bye...Baby

    (C) 2005
    ANTHOLOGY of
    One Woman’s Heart​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    memories linger in a pool of foreverness
    tyte felt joint sis.................................
     
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    Re: Remember

    That's how it go sometime. Excellent.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Moving on with no bitterness...that is a hard lesson to learn because you're pissed. You wrote of this lesson well.

    :thanks: for reminding us...the Fam...of this important lesson.

    :toast:
     
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    thank you all for the love....QT i am feeling your added lines thank you its so true...Rich i am glad you enjoyed thanks....Money man being bitter and hating one person is to much enegry wasted geeeshhhhhh yanno? thank you for the reply and constent support...Poetrymama most of the time relationships end bad but to forgive and let go gives you a brand new start without baggage....thanks



    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Memories are but a heartbeat away ~

    A heart beats for you.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you 1Poet for all the support and love....Angel
     
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