Black Poetry : DO YOU RECOGNIZE ME?????

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  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do you recognize me ….
    I am the sweet taste on your lips
    The band-aid that covers you when you bleed
    The warmth that extends the length of your frame
    The whisper in your ear that eases your pain

    Do you recognize me…
    I am the strengthen you find from within
    When it seems like you can’t win…
    no matter what you do
    I am the one that sticks beside you
    An adhesive stronger than any glue

    Do you recognize me….
    I am the reason the dimples appear in your cheeks
    I am the source of what makes your heart and body week
    I am that feeling you get when you look at
    A beautiful moon lit sky
    I am your drug of choice
    Thats why you stay so high

    Do you recognize me….
    I am not an imitation
    I am your emotional fixation
    That relieves your frustration
    I give you that feeling of
    "Can wait to see my baby anticipation"

    Do you recognize me….
    I am not wearing a fake disguise
    Misleading you with half truths and lies
    I do not need to explain why
    Your drawn to my independence, confidence, and sexy-ness
    Or you want, need, and desire
    To embark upon the secrecy
    Of my Passionate fiyah
    You wonder why
    You can't keep your mind and your eyes
    ~Off me~
    watching my every move and expression
    As if your hypnotized and mesmerized

    Do you recognize me…
    Why it is you keep trying to deny
    It is me that soothes your soul and
    strokes your ego when you not feeln so bold
    I know it feels like your losing control
    like I have some type of mental hold on you
    So instead of running into my arms you run away
    You run away and act as if everything is okay…
    But is it really….
    Because your actions are immature and silly
    If you really recognized me you could see
    That some love stories do end in
    ~Happily Ever After~

    If I’m giving you sun shiney days and laughter
    You should want to capture me and never set me free
    The question you still haven’t answered
    Do you Recognize Me?????????[/
     
  2. free2b_me

    free2b_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    umm hmmm

    Yes ma'am, I do recognize, indeed, nice scribe poet, as always 4 everluv!!
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Perhaps he hasn't recognized you for all you truly are, can't see the truth for all it's luster, if he hasn't recognized..he should. Enjoyed your write poetess.
     
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    Great Flow :spinstar:4EVERLUV:spinstar:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes i reconginize all of you
    and all the wonders u can do
    i feel ya all ova me
    see ya in my dreams
    i reconginize thee.....awesome flow i can feel ya right now soul deep!
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow I can recoginize that this is an excellent write.
     
  7. Lataisha Nicole

    Lataisha Nicole Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes!, I recognize you, and you are truly a blessing from God, and if anyone can't see it, maybe,just maybe.... they can't.
    Nice write poet.
    Love On!
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    hell YEA

    I RECOGNIZE YOU

    BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN

    WITH SO MUCH LOVE AND PASSION

    I'M FEELING IT
     
  9. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello there Free:
    Thank you for your constant lov and support.
    You are too kind. And btw....why you take the
    pics down so fast. I didnt get a chance to check
    you out....:) I will catch you the next time you feel
    like sharing.:)


    watz:
    Thank you so much. This write came from
    numerous experiences Ive had and some
    of some other sistas I know. It just made
    me wonder do they even recognize the real
    with its right their. Oh well...just blown' a
    little steam. I so appreciate you as always.


    HODEE:
    Thank you dear one. Your luv is most
    appreciated.


    $RICH$ & So'ja:
    I know you brothas would.
    Real recoginzes Real....Right...
    Thank you dear hearts for you
    never ending luv.


    asimple:
    Thank you...Thank you...
    I know you probably can
    feel where Im coming from.
    But you know nothing can hold down
    a strong black Godess for long.


    Lataisha:
    The ones that dont can keep it movin...
    Thanks so much for blessn' my flow.



    Much Luv
     
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