Khasm13 : do you really remember?

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    do you really remember?
    ...the first time someone kissed you
    ...and made your body shiver
    ...a feeling that you wished to continue
    ...while the emotions flowed like a river

    do you really remember?
    ...the first time you were made to feel less then
    ...someone voicing their opinion like truth
    ...deep inside a bigots hate you swim
    ...feeling like fate and destiny locked you in a phone booth

    do you really remember?
    ...the first song that rocked your mind
    ...made you feel like you were alive
    ...had your body moving in time
    ...to the beat, until the end of the song arrived

    do you really remember?
    ...your first love and your first heart break
    ...the war and peace of a lovers embrace
    ...the sweet ice cream and the bitter cake
    ...the soul searching that follows, and the mirror you face

    do you really remember?
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I remember
    that first kiss that left a tickle
    and i didn't know why:)
    and how it may my body quiver
    and i didn't know why
    that feeling of emotion
    that cause a deep rush
    and i didn't know why
    yeah i remember:)
    with a smile

    I remember
    when i needed encouragement
    and someone was there
    to help
    me to know my worth
    and how those others
    try to self destruct
    my positive vibe
    in keeping hope alive
    yeah i remember
    it made me a warrior
    I do remember

    I remember
    that first song that rock my fire
    that hum that desire
    keeping me a fighter
    yeah that tune is still with me
    and when i hear it
    i groove right with it

    I remember
    my first love
    and how i could not think
    of no one but him
    and how it broke my heart
    feeling those thows of dart
    making up , breaking up
    then just departing
    yeah i remember
    it very well
    the path from
    way back then
    to my here and now
    i remember it very well

    wonderful wonderful wonderful drop:) my brother...feeling the energy to flow
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  3. Khasm13

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    sista blue you are something else...
    i loved your flow
    your wordz always da :heart:
    thank you my sista...you are a tru warrior
    one love
    khasm
     
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    very well done
    likes the flow
    and the question ask
    :wink: i can remember
    nice drop mmy brother
     
  5. Khasm13

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    thanks mba for checkin me out
    glad you can remember too
    one love
    khasm
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    khasm

    another nice floE brutha, makes the reader stop and really think and reflect, wonderful job brother.
     
  7. Khasm13

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    thanks nita mae...
    i was try'n to get poets to remember...
    i hope thas what it did for you :)
    one love
    khasm
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do I remember??
    I remember... not wanting to remember what it is I wasn't suppose to remember,

    I remember...wanting desperatly to remember that first kiss, that I remember I don't remember,

    <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<Khasam...I remember well>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

    I remember...so well the first song that moved me called: "At Last"...that DIDN'T last as I remember,

    I remember my first love...I remembered to not fall...but GROW in love this time around and yes...I will always...
    remember.

    ask me that question again !!
     
  9. Khasm13

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    queen...how did i know that you remembered?
    i don't know...i just did :)
    thank you sista...and you are right
    love teachs you how to grow...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bruh Khasm13
    THIS IS TYTE!!!!!!!!!!

    It's these memories that shape who we are
    How we function
    And how our personalities are shaped

    I love the thought put into this
    Good scribe from a great poet!

    Feelin U

    PEACE AND LOVE
    TWISION
     
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