Khasm13 : do you really feel me...

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    when i'm not around
    do my past statements make a sound?
    cause i would like to know
    exactly which way to go
    do you feel my heart and soul
    or just my swollen member
    after sex packets unfold
    the answers to these questions
    i'm not trying to mold
    i'm just tired of being out in da cold
    stuck with superfical
    women with issues
    that act way to bold...

    is it my selection process?
    i don't know...i guess
    my patience has faced an ill test
    i'm not asking right now for love manifest
    i just want to know if you feel me
    like long johns on your bottom
    when the wind is chilly
    cause really
    i'm feeling you
    and i just wanted to know
    if you felt the same way too
    d#mn...
    i got too many wordz for a haiku
    f<>ck it...
    in lue
    of asking too much
    do you ever miss my touch
    yeah...right there
    i'm just asking
    cause i care
    and i have a lot of love to share...
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop
    a little emontional flow

    Peace and Love
    Angel
     
  3. Khasm13

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    thanks mzblk...
    i appreciate dat....word
    one love
    khasm
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    can't help but feel you
    as the flow rows
    so tenderly
    holding an expression
    of warmth wrapped
    in a comfort
    of so much
    and just enough
    very nice Warrior
    Peace
    Blue:heart:
     
  5. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel you on this one....... Nice poem.... Felt the emotion behind it....
     
  6. PositiveMindset

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    Do U really feel me?

    very nice question posed.
    Do U feel my heart or just my love's pole?

    People need 2 learn 2 differentiate.

    Nice piece, bruh.
     
  7. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    know this…
    wheneva you are not around
    you are there…still
    by the grace of my own FREE will
    in the recesses of my mind
    no rest can I find
    no rest do I seek
    from the thoughts manifested by the words you speak
    with wisdom you enrich and enlighten
    stimulate and heighten
    my senses and spirituality
    my sensual/sexual sensibility
    so I embrace my turn to be BOLD…
    so your essence I can behold

    engulfed in the spirit of you
    what is it about you that seems to impress?
    I digress…
    I guess…
    cause I’m feelin you in the first degree
    sign my verdict…enter my plea…I’m willingly…guilty
    of being a victim to the soul sounds of you
    when the winds blow against my being
    your warmth is what I’m feeling
    Inside…warming… out
    and I close my eyes without a doubt
    that it is the thought of you
    the anticipation of loving…you
    the yearning to be of…you
    I’m just saying because I care
    and for you …all this Love I would gladly share
    ***************************************************

    I'm sure your destined Queen will be VERY pleased to know your heart is as potent as your mind my brotha :) :grouphug:
     
  8. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Khasm... K H A S M!

    it's pieces like this that
    makes my love affair with
    poetry soul [email protected] good!

    thank you :)

    triniti thats a fly reply ^5 :)


    passionproduces&
    ifeelalovepoemcomeon
    Coco :heart:
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, emotionally posed, and well felt. Thought provoking as well...flow on.
     
  10. LyrikalShe

    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: Those last two lines got me. Alright now!

    Serenity...
    Brandi
     
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