Black Poetry : do you realise?

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  1. trinitymatrix79

    trinitymatrix79 Member MEMBER

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    Do you realise?


    Do you realise how it feels,
    Not to have you next to me,
    Your taste, I feel would be so sweet,
    But still forbidden to my lips…

    Do you realise how dear the price,
    The price I have to pay,
    Self-inflicted, torturous desires,
    Consuming my passion in every way…

    I do realise the bounty,
    Bestowed from above upon our spirits,
    Hell baby! Can’t you see the beauty,
    That of our souls intertwined,
    They increasingly resemble,
    Natural forces in harmony,
    Am I your air or your water?
    Sweet thing, that’ s for you to decide…
    But do you realise how violently,
    You fuel my fire inside?

    Do you realise, I m from Mali?
    The land of our great kings and ancient tribes,
    They beat our drums with frenzy,
    Intensely and with great pride,
    Do you realise my soul could be all yours,
    And my hips could be your drums?
    Would you beat them passionately,
    And grab them violently?
    Or would you like to caress them softly,
    taste them as your delicacy?

    Do you realise my loud moans and cries,
    Will ignite that passion,
    You are trying to hide,
    You will be relentlessly sweating,
    Spending your seed in and out of me,
    Shivers of pleasure running through my skin,
    Will Blind me from hearing you cream,
    Where do you end or begin?
    Is that you baby,roaring wildly in my ears…?

    Do you realise these sweet verses,
    Could become our reality,
    We could put them in practice,
    Whenever you want to taste me
    If only you could realise…
    then what is meant to be will be,
    Then maybe you would realize,
    There is nothing for you to realise,
    Too late for you to fly,
    Your heart belongs to me...
     
  2. trinitymatrix79

    trinitymatrix79 Member MEMBER

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    feel free to criticise, I am on a learning curve here and need your support
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do you realise my loud moans and cries,
    Will ignite that passion,
    You are trying to hide

    Do you realise how hearts belong to poetry of this ilk-
    Very nice!

    1poetsought~