Black Poetry : Do You Miss Me?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by baller, Oct 10, 2002.

  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do you miss all the crazy
    This-and-that
    We used to do

    Does the chitchat
    You now have
    Pack the same punch
    Ours used to
    Or,
    Do you miss that?
    No.
    Well, do you miss the
    Evening walks by the lake
    At sunset

    Oh…you do that, also

    Hmmm

    What about the
    Picnics in the park
    From late afternoon
    ‘til early dark

    Oh…you do

    All the things I’ve taught you
    You teaching him those, too?

    Yeal…well, that’s cool.

    Did he buy you that fancy car
    And all those things you wanted before
    That I couldn’t afford

    He did?

    He’s got it like that…huh?

    I understand.
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    sounds like it was all good until the car showed up

    DSS
     
  3. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If she dont miss is now... she will!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol @ DSS!!

    it's always strange to realize that all of those things that you believed were so special to a relationship aren't special only to that relationship (ok...i don't know if that made any **** sense, but...lol) ...

    props to ya bra
     
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