Black Poetry : Do you love Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by dojo54, Nov 11, 2002.

  1. dojo54

    dojo54 Member MEMBER

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    Do you love me or do you not?
    you told me once, But I forgot.
    So tell me now, and tell me true.
    Of all the girls I've have met.
    you are the one I'll never forget.
    And if I die before you do,
    I'll go to heaven and wait for for you.
    If your not there by Judgrment day.
    I'll know you went the other way.
    I'll give the angels Back their wings,
    Just to prove my love is true.
    I would give up everthing to be with you:love:
     
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    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh my Goodness !! That was just too **** sweet !
    and for some reason it caught me by surprise !

    Natasha
     
  3. dojo54

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    Thank you Natasha, Thats how I feel
     
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    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh if I could only here these wordz sweetly whispered into my ear :)

    1luv
     
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    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dojo, I do like this new version. And I am so happy to see you back on the page. :) And of course you do know how I feel.
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwww

    nice poem dojo
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh-boy...this was sweet, cute and stuff too...awwwwww.
     
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    :) Thank you Redlady, Lonleypoet and Two fish, Im glad you liked my flow:D
     
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    ahh ****!!

    this is off the chain

    pd

    :toast:
     
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    dojo

    this is some kinda beautiful "peace"...Nothing melts the heart more than a man who doesn't mind expressing his love for his lady...through poetry.

    I love it!
    :heart:

    alyce
     
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