Black Poetry : DO YOU LOVE HER?

i look at you...knowing there is no way
to cleanse, or erase, the mistakes i've made
or ease the pain, and hurt, i've caused
nor all the time, and happiness, we've lost

by what i've done

no one can love me...the way that you do
no one is as beautiful, passionate, or true
with all the depth...of a generous soul
your love goes beyond the accomplishments told

it wasn't my goal

to hurt you...or cause you pain
to bring heartache...and all the rain
that's entered your life...because of me
when ALL you've offered...is a calming sea
of wondrous joy...and a gentle touch
i know i've saddened you...but i need you so much

yes...I LOVE YOU

don't let our journey be ended by this
...this crook in the road of continued bliss
mistakes i've made. i'm sorry for this
let me share my heart...and happiness

WITH YOU.​


SOMETIMES, WE'RE LED ASTRAY, WILLFULLY. SOMETIMES, WE MAKE MISTAKES, AND NEED FORGIVENESS. HOW TO DETERMINE WHICH IS WHICH IS A TASK I DON'T ENVY YOU...BUT, IF YOU LOVE HIM, YOU MUST TRY. BEAUTIFUL, BUT SAD, FLOW. follow your heart.

the river floweth.

In times of old
I looked so deeply at you
Thru the eyes of an innocent child
but yet those same eyes where
the eyes of an aged spirited woman

In my youth
The Truth
You demanded that I see you, the real you
Not through the worldly eyes of lust
And you gained my trust
My admiration and respect

You've made not one mistake
With regard to the essence of my being
And I somehow managed to get lost
Thrown off the course
In my determination to overcome
The only love that I ever knew

You

As the world presented,

All the options of what love might be
No matter where I was or where you were on the path
You never forgot about me

How could I be so blind
Not to see
That you where the one
Every definition of love and sexy

Your heart is the symbol of home
Even if I walk alone
Your spirit is my spirit
And I know how you feel
You've peaked me to an ecstacy
Where love is for real

I couldn't have learned to be an upright woman
If you were not an upright man

So in my realization and awakening
to the woes of my former ways
You have been the blessing that has healed my heart

And I love you too...

Always!


Peace Baller,

I read this this morning.... I had an interview for a new job today, and because of this response I was so high in spirit I know I got it.... and just before I left I read your response... thank you, thank you and thank you... it really touched my heart.... made me think of growin wise and those rockin chair days u metioned in one of ur other pieces... much respect

and thank you for the love Sister CB.. Sister Queen and Brother Rich.....
 
Peace Ms. Lady:
This is a very beautiful piece here.
I felt your every word deeply.

This line in the original piece


"My love has no purpose
It simply just is"


Had me smh...I feel you.

and this verse in the response to baller's
flow back:


"In my youth
The Truth
You demanded that I see you, the real you
Not through the worldly eyes of lust
And you gained my trust
My admiration and respect"


Oh my goodness...

Much enjoyed the read.

baller:
You flowed it back most perfectly with that beautiful baller
poetic style that I luv
 
Do you love her?
Like I love you?


You see me
I know you do

And all the changes this life
Has put me through

You stood there with her
And you said I do .........

I never said I do
Because I didn't

I have loved you for eternity
An endless minute

You see,

If I do not love you
In the ways that I do

We're thru

No more me
No more you

My love has no purpose
It simply just is

Love for the sake of love

He is mine
I am his

But I need to know
So I can grow

Reach my woman-hood

Do you love her?
Like I love you?


I don't understand how you could

Does she make you happy
As much as I make you free?

Does she ignite your delight
Like the light witin me?

Does she create and manifest you
And accept your divine pride?

Is she afraid to be brave
And let you inside?

Do you love her?
Like I love you?


My spirit said daddy
And so you appeared!

My spirit said brother
Protect me in the times that I feared!

My spirit said son
And you looked up lovingly at me.

But now my spirit says husband
Will you marry me?

Do you love her?
Like I love you?


Perhaps cupid is a myth
That carries a spear

Perhaps he has pierced my heart
Because the emotion is there

Perhaps I slept with him
But I was not awake

I don't really care
How many lifetimes it will take

For you to know
That she can't possibly love you

The way that I do.

Do you love her?
Like I love you?


And how do I love you
Well,
You can count all the ways

I love you tomorrow
today
and all my yesterdays

In fact,

Your love is the only thing
that I will admit to be slave

I love you from the cradle
All the way to the grave

If krishna had no radha
And cat had no nip

I'd wish we were siomese twins
joined at the hip

If hip had no hop
And the sky had no blue

If inspector had no gadget
And juice had no crew

If common had no sense
And pinky no brain

My love for you
Would still be insane

If nothing else existed
If none had a care

My love for you
Would continue to be there

You can tell me if,

You love her?
Like I love you?

Can you look me right in my heart
And tell me that you do because I wish that you would.

No,

Well I didn't think that you could.

And it's only a matter of time
That she'll have to accept the fact that you're

Mine.

I've finally defined a selfless

Mine.

(And that's us)

Sister Miss Lady
This flow is great. I love this.

I have loved you for eternity
An endless minute

Does she make you happy
As much as I make you free?


ALL

Does she ignite your delight
Like the light witin me?

OF

Does she create and manifest you
And accept your divine pride?

THIS and MORE

Is she afraid to be brave
And let you inside?

Does he love her? Like you love him?
 
Sister Miss Lady
This flow is great. I love this.





ALL



OF



THIS and MORE


Does he love her? Like you love him?


Sister 4EverLuv

Thank you kindly.....

Brother Baller

Thank you and your welcome.... whatever I don't have or get right now is saving my life.... but me tinks it's in the bag....

Brother Hodee:

Thank you very much

And

yes, he does

love her as much as I love him.... the only difference is I love myself as much as he loves both of us.... and that makes our love innocent and would never give either of us the ability to hurt the other.... she hurt him and same as another hurt me but loving each other spiritually has given us the definition of forgiveness....

thank you for asking.....
 

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