Black Poetry : Do You Know What I Mean?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by CarrieMonet, Jan 1, 2004.

  1. CarrieMonet

    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Could it be
    I've sparked your interest,
    are you even a bit curious
    that underneath this baby face
    there is sweetness for you to taste?
    I'm full of longings
    passions
    and dreams,
    I want to share all my desires,

    Do you know what I mean?

    Let me get you hot
    with a nibble to to your ear
    a sensual kiss
    spreading heat between us
    sharing mutual bliss.
    Whipped cream fantasies
    will now come true
    south of the border
    for me and you,
    tasting all of your manhood
    body
    soul
    and mind
    exploding my love on yours
    helping you climb
    to heights unimagined
    places unforseen
    I want to share all of my desires

    Do you know what I mean?
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I know just what u mean
    now step into da extreme
    and feel the love i bring
    as we sing cross da galaxy
    unto the orbit of ya soul
    as our bodies touch
    sweetness unfold
    now take ya air wave into a flyte
    as i set da mood right
    follow da doves in da night
    as they giude by candle light
    for a desire to set a fire
    take ya heart up higher
    in a bliss of love
    from the one above
    u feel what i mean
    are u ready to feel the dream
    of a extreme bliss
    of compassioness twist
    of da one u so crave

    u know what i mean !
     
  3. LeRoy

    LeRoy Active Member MEMBER

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    Wow, thats one hot piece
    keep flowin cause
    thats some real talk
    KEEP WRITING AND I'LL KEEP READING
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed dis was very nice flowing poetess
    ya scribe is nice flow on !!!!!
     
  5. CarrieMonet

    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You all are so talented in this spot!!
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If he didn't know before...

    this piece will definitely make it clear...

    nice flow!
     
  7. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa...

    Now I need a big glass of ice water & a cold shower.

    :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot:
     
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    CarrieMonet,

    You have my complete attention!
     
  9. blaqquebeauty

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    too hot

    i am so impressed with your writing skills. you are one of the reasons why i don't want to post my poetry, you are too good. i chose the little firey smiley face because your poem is muy caliente. very hot.
     
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