Black Poetry : Do What I do

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Jan 14, 2008.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do What I do

    Plumb stress on course rhymes become less in force
    Ate some cheerios, fear foes need muscles and a source
    Magazine stay fly as they try bring me down, wear bling around
    My thing in town is to roll on bold strong dubs while cd sounds
    Blast out the back glass fast, speakers in the trunk get freakier
    With crunk ill and calm like Lil John snap my fingers feel sweeter
    Scrubs give up entirely and live corrupt and fiery I got stories
    Up in my diary that tells of life, hell and strife in categories
    I’ve faced in this place, the rap game deserts me and this
    Hurts a G, stay alert for a free chance to advance on a list
    Of surprised demo’s wanna drive Limo’s need profit in my pocket
    Doe, now my plan is weak as I stand on streets hustling trying to drop it
    Like its hot by begging for nickels and dimes for dinner pickles and wine
    Panic when I see a mechanic can’t even keep my vehicle aligned
    My desire is strong to have a new tire put on so I went to firestone
     
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    You never know what stories that you tell that may reach someone who needs to know.
     
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    Hey rhymebad
    I guess all we can do is make do
    I hear yall

    Peace~N~Love

     
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    Word on this piece!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    do what u do and do it well
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS FOR THE PROPS ON THIS ONE FOR REAL YALL
     
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    nice write
     
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    Brother I like this.....Passion is in all of us.....and we need succeed ...Rocking the Flow Rhymebad!!!!!
     
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    thanks for the props everybody for real
     
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    objects used in games of chance would be a mechanic....

    you want a new tire...

    because you want to align with us.....

    if you want to align with us that would lead me to beleive you are something different then we....

    I can't do what you do..... because I don't understand you......

    it's in the eyes.. and if I can't see your eyes then you need to make me see thru your writing and I can't.....

    you also.... made comment about a "tampon"...

    r u somehow saying that it is ok to shove something white inside myself.....