Black Poetry : Do walls hold such?

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  1. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do walls hold such information
    that they are afraid to speak it
    and let us know?

    when crimes are taken place
    within household walls
    They are the only witnesses
    but they never come up to the stands and confess.

    It's uselss to ask something.., something?
    I don't believe walls are capable of blocking life
    but can sometimes hide it to the eyes
    which are mentally blind.

    Walls are substitutes for lifes mysteries
    If we are asking walls
    then we will never get an answer
    but life holds so much more
    like a book without words
    It contains only pictures

    Life has the answers
    and if you think life holds devine sources
    then we are sadly mistaken
    however, life holds it all, and can tell it all
    but,
    how do we listen to life when it seems to be saying so many things at once?
    I can't comprehend it all, can you?


    :?::qqb010::thinking:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Mysteries made to be kept
    understanding the unknown beyond what our mentals comprehend
    like a stain glass and a dark shadow
    walls hold much that will never reveal for they are hidden secrecy
    so we battle life as it's presented and change what we can
    all we can't we just try to make understanding of it and live

    It's sometime not to be nor to get it's full circle.
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lifes mysteries are very confusing
    but to know a little answers conforts my soul
    Thanks $$ RICH$$ :toast:
     
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    Nicely done.
     
  5. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you so much Legacy21
    I appreciate you taking the time out
    and reading my poem

    take care:)
     
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