Black Poetry : Do U Understand?

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He took my hand
    Do u understand?
    See I aint playing a game
    But its time you get tame
    Do u understand?
    We dance all night long
    And played up under
    The cherry moon
    Until the next noon
    He took my hand
    Do u understand?
    I am the one
    The one in his eyes
    Don’t act blind
    Or play dumb
    You will get lost every time
    I will hurt you over mind
    Do u understand?
    I am the one
    He is so strong and bold
    And he holds my hand
    And he is mine
    See I know the pains
    The restless nights
    And the hurt that swims
    Along with the wild dreams
    When he rest
    In my arms
    Do u understand?
    I am never unsure
    Of his love
    I give him his passion
    As we vibe together
    Through the air
    Baby we float
    I know his thoughts
    What he feels like
    He is my love
    My knight in shiny armor
    The prince of my dreams
    The air I breathe
    Do u understand?
    How he takes nothing
    And brings something
    I am his essence
    And I will protect him
    As he protects me
    Do u understand?
    Bold and strong
    Free as a bird
    We fly the air
    Never to be cage but sage
    As we age through the wind
    With the love of us
    Do u understand?
    Our love is alive
    With a bond that's
    Unbreakable
    Do u understand?

    (C) 2004
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...there is nothing more
    lovely than...
    "Confidence in love and
    in the love of the special
    someone"...without that
    assuredness...one has nothing
    but wishes...

    Love the message in this...
    Beautiful flow Sister!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    if one not understand surely he overstand
    dis was tyte and well felt too wow!!!!!!!!!!
     
  4. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes maam........I do understand....you taught me well :fyi: Nice
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Sage for the support n love on dis

    Richie Rich...glad ya feeling it and enjoyed...thank you for all ur love
    and support you give me

    Chastity..:lol: happy you enjoyed thanks for the read n love here

    peace
    angel
     
  6. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I understand ....every word, as it rings through the heights of the def. very nice piece, thanks for the warning and the writing on the wall :deal:
     
  7. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a beautiful flow, sis. And yes, I do hear where you're comin from.
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :welldone: Drop angel I see you got ya flow back!
     
  9. PurpleMoons

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    Dang sis! I heard that!
    lay it on down now!

    Tyte drop!
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When you love someone, there is a fierceness, a fearlessness that can accompany it...yes. Why back down about something you believe in so strongly, I know I wouldn't. Strong vibe.
     
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