Black Poetry : DO U REALLY

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Aug 11, 2004.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I WANNA KNOW
    DO YOU REALLY
    LOVE THE BEAT
    AND ENJOY DA
    TREAT OF POETIC
    SWEETS !
    I WANNA KNOW
    IS IT JUST TO FLOW
    HIT RUN AND GO !
    I WANNA KNOW
    DO U LOVE DA SHOW
    TELL ME WHY U SCRIBE
    IS IT ALL FOR A QUICK
    RIDE INSIDE
    I WANNA KNOW
    DO U CARE , ARE U WILLING
    WILL U BARE THE WEIGHT
    I WANNA KNOW IF U
    REALLY UNDERSTAND
    DA NEEDS AND PLAN
    I WANNA KNOW OF YA
    SUPPORT DA COST OR
    STRESS IT CAUSE U TO
    REST ON SHUT DOWN
    WHY U SHY AWAY BUT
    U SEEM TO WANNA PLAY
    WHAT DAMAGE IT BRING
    CHEATED , BEAT OR FEEL
    ANYTHING
    I WANNA KNOW DA SCORE
    BEFORE I SHUT DA DOOR
    BE REAL FEEL TO DA CORE
    DA DEPTH OF REALITY
    IS IT ALL IN VAIN
    SHAME ! SHAME ! SHAME !
    WHO DA BLAME SAY DA NAME
    I WANNA KNOW
    DO U SEE DA NEED
    AND HOW HEARTS BLEED
    DO U CARE ,
    DANGER ! DANGER ! DANGER !
    FULFILL DA AIR
    CAN I GET YA VOW TO CLAIM
    AND SCRIPT YA NAME
    HERE A SIX PACK
    OH A PACK OF CIGZ
    A FIFTH AND SOME MICKY D'S
    I KNOW IT'S A TIGHT SQUEEZE
    BUT COM'MO PLEASE !
    WHERE U GOING ..................
    HAVE A PLACE TO BE
    OH I SEE SO THERE'S NO WE
    WHY U CAN'T BE REAL
    U READ DA DEAL U SEE DA THRILL
    AND DA LOVE POSE'D IN YA FACE
    LIKE A SWEET ROSE BUT U PLAYING
    DA GAME COLD
    KEEP STROLLING I'M ON A ROLL
    LET ME BREAK IT ON DOWN
    IT WON'T BE LONG BEFORE
    IT'S GONE IF U DON'T STAND UP
    BE STRONG WHAT IS HOME
    WITHOUT HOME U CAN'T CLONE ME
    U CAN'T FINE ME U CAN'T LOVE ME
    IT PLAN TO SEE COZ U TURN FROM ME
    IT ALL A RIDE DAT GIVE ME CHILLS
    WHEN WE ALL CAN SPLIT DA BILL
    I'VE BEEN ON THE HILL TOP AND I
    SHOP TIL I DROP AND CARRIED DA LOAD
    GAVE U MY ALL ON A SINGLE CALL
    NOW U RAW AND GONNA LET ME FALL
    SEE I LOVE U
    LOVE ME BACK
    WHY DO U LACK
    IT'S LIKE CAT IN DA HAT
    SEE NOW DAT'S WHACK
    NO NO NO !!!!!
    I'M NOT DONE YET
    BOUT TO HIT U WIT DA
    BLAST
    WE AS ONE AND COMMON GROUND
    DA BEST U FINE AN ANY TOWN
    THE GREAT WALLS OF ALL AND
    24/7 CALL STRONG BY NUMBERS
    YET LOW IN STEEM
    U LOVE IT I SEE BUT U CAN'T
    EVEN SUPPORT ME
    U CRY FOUL U CRY PROUD
    BUT REFUSE TO MAKE A STAND
    GET READY FOR THE NEW PLAN
    WHICH IS "D"
    WATCH DA DREAMS TURN TO
    CREAM AND DA SONG IT SING
    STOP !
    LISTEN IT CAN RING FROM DA
    UNITED WE STAND AND POSE
    A UNITY A BODY OF DA PEOPLE
    FOR DA PEOPLE AS PEOPLE
    LISTEN TO THE REAL CRY !
    TASTE DA SALTY TEARS FROM
    DA EYEZ AND KNOW TRUTH NOT
    DA LIE
    DO U REALLY
    HEAR , SEE AND CARE
    I WANNA KNOW TELL ME
    BEFORE I GO AND LET MY
    HEART TRUELY KNOW BUT
    HURRY ABOUT TO SHUT DA
    DOOR AND U WILL SEE IT'S
    COLD FROM DA STREETS
    OH ! YEAH HERE U GO
    SOME COOKIES & MILK
    SIP AND DIP EVEN SOME CHIPS
    SOME SODA POP AND A GLOT
    BUT REMEMBER I'LL TAKE DA
    LAST SHOT
    LISTEN I WANNA KNOW STAY
    I'M HOT READY TO ROCK DIS
    SPOT AND SHOW DA WORTH
    AND REMOVE DIS SIMPLE CURSE
    BUT U KILLING ME SOFTLY
    I THOUGHT U RESPECT ME
    AND U WAS COMING CORRECTLY
    BUT U AMAZE ME BUT PLAYIN ME
    FOR SELF GLORY BUT DA TRUTH
    IS WITHIN DA STORY
    THEIR'S NO FAME IF WE DON'T
    SUPPORT DA GAME
    THEIR'S NO HOPE IF WE LET GO
    DA ROPE
    THEIR'S NO WILL TO THIRLL
    IF WE GONNA KILL
    BY BEING SHY AND BRING YA
    SAD REASON WHY
    SEE I TOLD U PLAY TIME OVA
    DON'T BE COVERED
    U COME DOWN TO MY HOOD
    IN MY COMMUNITY BUT ON THE
    WAY DOWN U FORGOT ABOUT
    UNITY , BONDING , SHARING, CARING
    SUPPORTING , LOVING , REACHING
    SWINGING , LEAVING STRESS AND A
    LOADED MESS WE BLESSED
    AND STILL U CAN'T SEE WE PASS
    DA TEST I CONFESS
    I DO CARE , I DO LOVE , I DO NEED
    I DO SUPPORT , I DO LONE DA TASTE
    OF FOREVERNESS BUT DO U REALLY
    I WANNA KNOW ????
    WHAT CAN U OFFER ME
    WHAT CAN U GIVE ME
    WHAT CAN U SHARE
    WHAT CAN U PROMISE
    WHAT CAN U DO
    I WANNA KNOW !!?
    TOO MANY TO FEW
    TO WISE TOO MANY EYES
    SOME SAY YES SOME SAY NO
    SOME WON'T EVEN SHO
    SOME IS RAW , SOME IS REAL
    SOME KNOW SOME JUST SLOW
    COM'MO PLEASE !
    SO DA SEGA OF STRUGGLE CONTINUES
    :help: :help: :help: :help: :help: :help: :help: :help: :help: :help:
     
  2. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this reminded me of the
    struggle btwn good/evil
    of giving/receving
    of greed and need
    but we all need to remember wat we do comes back 3 folds

    nice one rich... long... but it kept me focused
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am so feeling you here...and understand!!! the mind may have wander a little but you was on point and on fire!!! I wanna know too shoot..^5
    loving your flow baby!!!!!

    :kiss:
    Angel
     
  4. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    Tyte Drop Brother Rich!
    I feel ya!

    SUPPORT DESTEE.COM...........YOUR HOME AWAY FROM HOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...I had to catch my breath for this one, when you start rolling on someone, you let it all out :flamet: ...this was tight...I liked the flow to this.
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    much goodness family word up!
    daroc , angel , purple , queentswana

    but yet da ear not here nor eyez see
    so i won't be done till all hear & feel me
    one so shy away , yet love to play
    one so not hear yet u feel me dear
    it's clear to see it's not a we .....
    so i'll call sadie now !
     
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    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ^5 brother!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Calling out the one and only Sadie? Uh oh, someone is not very happy....This spoke volumes....shields up everybody, it's on.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes Ms. Sadie come deep and direct
    so she visit again on her way !
    to reach and teach and sho the score
    time one get on the pot or out da spot

    heed to da word !
     
  10. who~is~she

    who~is~she Active Member MEMBER

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    this one threw me off a little, had to go back and read ALL of it again to get it.

    passionate drop. im feelin it.
     
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